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Sacred Heart Year 5
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Daisy A and Harry
2:16
It was silent until I turn around there are drops of water.
Noah and Zac
2:16
I walked into this long depressing tunnel as I saw a figure around six years old staring towards me like a lion looking at it’s prey
Tia and Bobby
2:17
Then Tia told me: “are you ok are you hurt.”
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:17
Well done for using speech!
Maisie and Barnaby
2:17
It was silent I could hear the sound of the the water dripping off the the roof of the Sewers on to the girl's head and mine.
Isabella and Alex
2:17
It was *
Freya & Amelia
2:17
After the rats had scurried away,I saw a girl staring at us. Her clothes were worn and ragged.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:19
May be you could introduce the girl slowly? What about:
In the corner of my eye I..
Esther and Alice
2:19
In the gloomy hallway I saw a figure l thought it was a doll then it turned its head all the way round and I heard a disturbing creek.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:19
Love the word disturbing! It tells me that things are not great! I want to read on... now tell me more!
Daisy B and Macy
2:19
I stumbled  to the ground with a stud I crawled to the walls but when touched the wall it was wet and soggy. I wondered what was that little girl was doing to make me stumble.
Michaela and Aurelia
2:19
Now, it is time to go home thats enough fright for tonight don’t you think.
Magdalena & Tiziano
2:20
I squinted my eyes at the writing. The words were dripping and I could smell it. It was fresh blood. The words were blurred but I made out: ‘hello prey’ .I saw a tunnel and peered round the entrance. I could hear a drop of water as it echoed through the tunnel. I could hear a young girl singing softly. It was easy to make out what she was singing. ‘Mary had a little lamb...’ She was at least six or seven years old. She giggled and turned. Her eyes were wide and her pupils were shrunken. She was wearing a torn, beige dress with some ripped tights. I turned and ran down the tunnel and panted when I reached the end and turned a corner...
Michaela and Aurelia
2:23
The northern light s ,
Tia and Bobby
2:23
Then I said back “ I’m fine, but thanks for asking.”
Milly and Rebecca
2:23
‘Drip drop’  it went  awfully silent we started floating but luckily the tunnel caught us we shouted “ STOP”
Noah and Zac
2:23
The figure moved slowly towards me that is when I knew that I have been noticed
Grace&Antony
2:24
Then I saw a tunnel with a blinding light at the far end.I turned around to see a silhouette singing nursery rhymes, but it almost sounded like a death song.I was scared-very scared.She charged after us still singing her death songs.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:25
Love that it sounded like a death song! I'm now scared!
Isabella and Alex
2:24
Then the small figure turned round and said “ why hello Alex Charnley I see your intitials are AC ....”.
Magdalena & Tiziano
2:24
Noah and Zac- The word of depressing really made me think. Well done!
Lucas and Jake
2:25
In the house, I saw a tunnel leading down, so deep that I felt like if I went in, I would never be able to come back again. I had walked further than I had been meant to. All of a sudden, I heard a faint squeak and it echoed deeper into the tunnel. I saw a silhouette of a rat. The walls were wet and cold. I did not no where I was at this moment of time.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:26
This is AMAZING!!! No or know?
Maisie and Barnaby
2:26
All you could hear was the echo of the limping girl.
Rory and Lexi
2:26
I went back outside it all changed. There was no black trees anymore no nothing just a big black tunnel.I saw a little girl, I froze my heart started pumping as fast as lightning then my body started to shake like a maraca of its head.
Daisy B and Macy
2:26
I took a deep breath but it smelt horrible that little girl did something. I got a shiver in me that she was a lunatic.
Freya & Amelia
2:26
In the corner of my eye i saw a face so I ran away.
Tia and Bobby
2:26
The lion spoke and told us to follow him.
Isabella and Alex
2:26
“Ugh where am I ?” Asked Alex “in my house , my name is Isabella, and I am not 6 I’m 9 I know I’m small, by the way I am the girl in the tunnel” .
Daisy A and Harry
2:26
The teal lights steal my eye sight
Milly and Rebecca
2:26
We found her  going portal were was she going??
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:26
Great us of a rhetorical question!
Daisy A and Harry
2:26
The light scatters across the sky like the moon.
Noah and Zac
2:27
As I stumbled upon a cottage is saw something that gave me tears in my eyes, it was my mums face in the sky who sadly passed away last year.
Daisy B and Macy
2:27
I scurried out of the tunnel,I ended up at a cosy snow cottage which had northern lights in the glistening sky.
Maisie and Barnaby
2:27
Standing ,on the rough snow the light in the sky warmed my heart up.
Tia and Bobby
2:27
In the cottage there was an old woman singing: I love to kill children she was
Daisy A and Harry
2:27
The sky looks like it could take you to another world.
Michaela and Aurelia
2:27
The northern lights I shouted what a night I thought how could this be a night, the green dark and gloomy light just gave me it, but what!
Esther and Alice
2:27
The glowing light above me was a lime jewel colour but was more than we thought. It was a magic portal. What could it lead to? Why was it there?
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Daisy B and Macy
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The calm, glistening water mirrrioring
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Noah and Zac
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1:52
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The motionless mist consumed the ruler - like, emerald trees.
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Michaela and Aurelia
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1:53
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the trees
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Daisy A and Harry
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2:01
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The moon is glowing like no other thing.
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Noah and Zac
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2:01
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As I walked up to this peculiar, petrifying house I heard my foot crush something it was a skull!
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Isabella and Alex
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2:01
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As I crept towards the abandoned house it suddenly set on fire.
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Maisie and Barnaby
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2:01
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As I walked across the crunchy grass I saw the scorching hot house burn to the ground
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Freya and Amelia
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2:03
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I walked past the wheat field, I glanced at the moon and realised something was there. A haunted,scary house.
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Daisy A and Harry
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2:18
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The girl dupery n
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Daisy B and Macy
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2:19
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I took a dear breath
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Daisy A and Harry
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2:19
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The girl ran away.Did she here us?
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Tia and Bobby
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2:25
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The northern lights looked like emerald in the sky.
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Isabella and Alex
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2:25
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Outside, in the sky there was the emerald, shiny lights !
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Lucas and Jake
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2:29
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Then, the rat was gone. I had reached the end of the tunnel now and saw another cottage. It seemed more cute this time. Again, I heard the the bloodthirsty scream that I had heard in the other house. I walked towards the house, prepared for my destiny. Flick. The light went on. I had seen it..
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Isabella and Alex
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2:30
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The snow covered the top of the little brown rusty cottage.
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Tia and Bobby
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2:30
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creepy sniffing like a ghoul. Picking up her sharp, silver blade she turned around and chased us chanting her song.
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Maisie and Barnaby
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2:30
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the northern lights lighting the sky above me, the world turned in to a magical place above me.
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