JotCast | St. Claire's Live Writing Session

St. Claire's Live Writing Session

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Abbie and Izzy

1:57

The ghostly reflection is like an entry to another world lureing you in.

Aidan and Ahlam

1:57

As the cold continue's to spread, the water turns into ice in seconds... Silence

Khushi and Edwin

1:57

The clear ice dripping into the water

Cole

1:57

The mist began to swallow the trees like a hungry beast

Fatma and Nicholas

1:57

The snow is like paint

David Mitchell

1:57

Fatima and Nicholas - Tell me more.

Abbie and Izzy - Ghostly is a lovely choice of work - well done!

Guest

1:57

Mr Mitchell we could use Majestic,Reflect,Transpent

David Mitchell

1:58

Well done, those are great choices!

Aleta and Huraiza

1:58

The giant green trees mysterious visitors.

Krystina and Gabriel

1:58

The snowy mist over coming the darkness

David Mitchell

1:59

Kinga and Kwesi

2:01

The clear river swims through the magestic trees.

Dshior and Hazim.

2:01

As the shadow, slowly walks accros the lake the trees swirl with the brees

Aidan and Ahlam

2:01

Who is that person? a man? woman, friend or foe?

Harley and Yasir

2:02

As the moon travels over the strange house Screams of fire in the house

Fatma and Nicholas

2:02

The flames are like gold

David Mitchell

2:02

Harley and Yasir - Read that back, can you change the part about the screams?

2:03

Fatma and Nicholas - Tell me more. Can you extend your simile?

Kai and tiago

2:03

The haunted house screamed with agony as fiery flames burn it to the ground

Kiyah and Daniel

2:03

The galaxy shines among the dark sky

Kinga and Kwesi

2:03

The ghostly pale moon was staring at you,the stars twinkling in the sky.

krystina and Gabriel

2:03

In the galaxy space , lovely bight stars shining among the long, purple grass!!

David Mitchell

2:04

Krystina and Gabriel - Can you change that to past tense? I think it might sound even better.

Dshior and Hazim.

2:04

As you crunch, across the grass pering,to see if any one was in side.

David Mitchell

2:04

Dshior and Hazim - I love the word 'crunch'!

Aleta and Huraiza

2:04

The galaxy looks over burnt dull cottage.

David Mitchell

2:05

Aleta and Huraiza - Can you think of a better word to 'looks'?

Cole

2:05

The stars are like little sparkles in the vast blue sky

David Mitchell

2:05

Cole - I like that!

Cole - Now describe the fames for me.

Khushi and edwin

2:05

The shiny purple galaxy and the purple is like a emrald,.

David Mitchell

2:06

Khushi and Edwin - Can you think of a different word for your second 'purple'?

jeriel an megan

2:06

The burning house screaming with pain

Abbie and Izzy

2:06

The flames so beautiful blood red from its victims.

Kiyah and Daniel

2:06

The flames rise as quicker than the hot sun

Aidan and Ahlam

2:06

With bated breath, I walked to the burning building, afraid of what will I find?

David Mitchell

2:06

Aidan and Ahlam - I love that opening!

Miss Morris

2:06

Dshior and Hazim - great personification but can you write it so that it is a compound sentence.

Kieron

2:06

The dark green grass leads you up to the brown house.

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