JotCast | St. Claire's Live Writing Session

St. Claire's Live Writing Session

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David Mitchell

2:07

Kieron - I like how you are leading me up the path. Can you describe what you might hear?

Kinga and Kwesi

2:07

The fiery red fire crawling across the house , trying to escape.

Kai and tiago

2:07

The moon watches from above the earth as the creepy,terrifying house begins to crumble

Aleta and Huraiza

2:07

The galaxy watches over the burnt dull cottage.

Kai and tiago

2:07

The weeds are like crispy sticks poking your arms and torso.

krystina and Gabriel

2:07

The bright, yellow fire spreads around like lava from a volcano

Cole

2:07

Thanks sir

David Mitchell

2:07

Cole - You're welcome. Dazzle me with your next sentence!

Abbie and Izzy

2:07

The moon is a ship sailing across the clouds.

David Mitchell

2:08

Abbie and Izzy - I like that! It paints a picture of a calm peaceful sky!

Fatma and Nicholas

2:08

The stars are like diamond sparkling in the vast sky

David Mitchell

2:08

Abbie and Izzy

2:10

The purple moor consumes the land so dry yet so gorgeous

Kieron

2:10

Loud dark wind.

Kinga and Kwesi

2:11

If you ever want to come to this house think again!

Dshior and Hazim.

2:11

As the moon watches over you like a guardian, he follows you with his eyes.

Abbie and Izzy

2:11

Thank you!

Khushi and edwin

2:11

A gold fire flame above the ghostly house

David Mitchell

2:11

Khushi and Edwin - Don't forget your punctuation.

krystina and Gabriel

2:11

The hunted house smells like a dust dead zombie

David Mitchell

2:11

Krystina and Gabriel - Can you change that sentence to past tense?

Kai and tiago

2:11

The creepy house is cursed like a ghost ship coming from its watery grave.

David Mitchell

2:12

Kai and Tiago - Well done! Don't tell the reader that it is creepy, describe it i a creepy was so that the reader thinks it's creepy. Have a go.

Kai and tiago

2:12

The building looks like an abandoned asylum from 1765

Harley and Yasir

2:12

I could feel the Drafts of the wind there the wholes in the house the smell like

Abbie and Izzy

2:12

Crumble crumble crumble hard to breathe so stifling.

Mrs Jones

2:12

Kai and Tiago - Great simile! can you change it to a metaphor?

Aleta and Huraiza

2:13

The must in the air grows on you like a wort

Aidan and Ahlam

2:13

As I walk in, the walls felt damp and I hear screeching...,I am not alone.

Mrs Jones

2:13

Harley and Yasir - what does the house smell like?

David Mitchell

2:13

Aiden and Ahlan - I love the ending to your sentence. It makes me want to read on and find out more... tell me more!

Cole

2:13

The unpleasant stench of damp walls hit me as I walked in.

Mrs Jones

2:13

Aidan and Ahlam - can you change the sentence to the past tense?

Cole - WOW!

David Mitchell

2:14

Cole - Stench is a great word to describe a terrible smell! Well done!

Kinga and Kwesia

2:14

Grey walls crumbling away when you touch it .

Fatma and Nicholas

2:14

Ghost look like they have lived there

David Mitchell

2:14

Don't forget your punctuation.

Kai and tiago

2:14

It’s like an abandoned lab were they did a dangerous experiment on people.

krystina and Gabriel

2:14

The old,war house haunted with the furious soldiers coming after you!

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