JotCast | St. Claire's Live Writing Session

St. Claire's Live Writing Session

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krystina and Gabriel

2:24

The creepy annabell girl walks towards you.Then you feel someting moving in your body

Kiyah and Daniel

2:24

The possessed girl thought there was a monster because of the wet dripping

David Mitchell

2:24

Kai and tiago

2:26

The light is brighter than the brightest substance ever seen my mankind.

Kieron

2:26

The dark brick walls curling like a slide. Walking through dark water is the silhouette of the possessed child.

David Mitchell

2:27

Kieron - I like that description of the child. You make her sound unpredictable which is great for a story!

Aleta and Huraiza

2:27

The ghosts watch over you as you tiptoe through the tunnel.

Abbie and Izzy

2:27

The young silhouette so small their features are anonymous.

Khushi and edwin

2:27

As annabell walks through the deadly tunnel.

Mrs Jones

2:27

Kieron, I am so thrilled at your writing today what can you tell me about the volcano?

David Mitchell

2:27

Khushi and Edwin - I like how you have named her.

Khushi and edwin

2:27

The red laver is as red as blood

Mrs Jones

2:28

Khushi and Edwin, can you tell me about the blood red lava?

David Mitchell

2:28

Khushi and Edwin - Good simile. Lava is also as hot as something. Can you think of a simile for the lava?

Kai and tiago

2:28

The tunnel looks like a tunnel we’re someone would die.

The moon is a ghostly galleon tossed upon the cloudy seas.

Fatma and Nicholas

2:28

The volcano has fire like red stone.

Abbie and Izzy

2:28

The lava taking shape so hot you can not stand it.

Kinga and Kwesia

2:28

A light breeze tickles your spine as you look down the volcano.

Harley and Yasir

2:28

Within the city lies a Volcano about to eroupt Be Careful

David Mitchell

2:29

Harley and Yasir - How might you know it was about to erupt? Would there be rumbles or noises? Describe these to me.

Dshior and Hazim.

2:29

As the lava,drips down the volcano families run for cover.

krystina and Gabriel

2:29

The marveling volcano explodes sending giant clumps of rocks and lava

Aidan and Ahlam

2:29

As I see the lights getting closer I know I'm going home, but I hear voices in my head who are they? what do they want?

Kiyah and Daniel

2:29

The volcano is hotter than a million flames touching the sun

Abbie and Izzy

2:29

Your breathing getting heavy as you ascend the huge mountain.

krystina and Gabriel

2:29

Mount Everest forming into the great, black volcano

jereil and megan

2:29

As the volcano erupts you cant hear anything but fury

Aleta and Huraiza

2:29

The larva drips down the rocky volcano.

Khushi and edwin

2:29

As the volcano exploded the lava ran down

David Mitchell

2:29

Jareil and Megan - I love that! Well done! How did this make you feel?

Kinga and kwesi

2:29

The lava is crawling down the hill.

Kiyah and Daniel

2:30

It’s about to explode everyone get down!!

David Mitchell

2:30

Kiyah and Daniel - What clues are there that it's about to explode?

Kieron

2:30

Volcanic lava flowing down humongous volcano travel down to city of Liverpool

Kai and tiago

2:30

The cascade of gas floats down the volcano.

Harley and Yasir

2:30

You Could here the rumbling of the volcano people knew they had to evaquate

Fatma and Nicholas

2:30

The lava is like Liverpool’s home shirt

David Mitchell

2:31

Fatma and Nicholas - You might want to think about something more angry and destructive. Can you think of something?

Kai and tiago

2:31

The volcano is as big as the volcano that killed everyone in Pompeii.

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