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St. Claire's Live Writing Session

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Khushi and edwin

2:14

When you touch the damp wall it feels like your going to fall through

Mrs Jones

2:14

Kinga and Kwesi - can you write a simile to compare the walls to something?

Dshior and Hazim.

2:14

As you touch the damp yellow walls in the ambandon house you feel the brees cross your legs.

David Mitchell

2:15

Dshior and Hazim - I like that sentence! I lie how the breeze crosses your legs. Makes me feel uneasy.

Kinga and Kwesia

2:15

The smell of dust was hiding away from the mysterious visitors.

The ceiling full of mound is creeping up the wall.

Kai and tiago

2:15

Some evil spirit has torn the wallpaper and is still there watching us

Kieron

2:15

The dark damp walls crumble into my hands like sand from a beach.

Kiyah and Daniel

2:15

The creepy dark house leads to your death .

David Mitchell

2:16

Kieron - That's a great simile!

Khushi and edwin

2:16

As the ghostly cramped house creekedand something feels like it’s climbing up you’re leg

David Mitchell

2:16

Mrs Jones

2:17

Kieron - well done! Wow I really like how you have compared the walls to sand

Fatma and Nicholas

2:19

Ghosts look like they have live there.

Abbie and Izzy

2:19

The musty air sent of a stench so vile the air is hard to breath in.

David Mitchell

2:19

Abbie and Izzy - Stench and vile are great words!

Kinga and Kwesi

2:19

Grey biscuits pretending to be walls .

Fatma and Nicholas

2:19

The house look like it has been the since the 1900

Kai and tiago

2:19

The inside walls are wet

David Mitchell

2:20

Kai and Tiago - Describe what they would feel like if you touched them?

Aidan and Ahlam

2:20

As I walk through the dark tunnel I see a little girl singing a lullaby, who is she? Is she nice?

krystina and Gabriel

2:20

The dark cave which swallows up your hopes and dreams

David Mitchell

2:20

Krystina and Gabriel - I love that sentence, you've made me want to escape quickly!

jereil and megan

2:20

The wet cold walls dripping with water.

Kieron

2:20

The dark brick walls curling like a slide. Walking threw dark water.

Mrs Jones

2:21

Aidan and Ahlam - can Ahlam describe the girl? Is she nice?

David Mitchell

2:21

Kieron - Tell me about the silhouette.

Harley and Yasir

2:21

As the little girl stands creepily in the tunnel is she possessed? They could hear the cry of a little girl.......

Dshior and Hazim.

2:21

As you walk through the grey damp tunnel a rat runs past your little legs!

Abbie and Izzy

2:21

When you touch the walls they send shivers up you hand.

Khushi and edwin

2:21

As you walk through the cold , dark , damp tunnel you can feel the water dripping on you

Kinga and Kwesi

2:21

Traveling across the long forgotten tunnel looking for magical treasure and dreams .

David Mitchell

2:22

Abbie and Izzy - I like that, you or your?

Kai and tiago

2:22

The light is as bright as 900,000,000 suns

David Mitchell

2:22

Kai and Tiago - Can you think of something that is so bright that you could compare this to?

Kai and tiago

2:22

As you walk through the tunnel of death you feel a shiver go down your spine.

David Mitchell

2:23

Kai and Tiago - I like that. You are creating a good level of suspense.

Khushi and edwin

2:23

The dark shine of the moon reflecting on the girl .

Kinga and Kwesi

2:23

The silhouette of a little girl was walking down the tunnel of death.

David Mitchell

2:23

Kinga and Kwesi -How did that make you feel? Tell me.

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