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St. Gerrard's Live Writing Session

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Caleb and Colin

11:03

As the girl approached the end of the tunnel, the only thing you could see was the shining light in the distance and the girls silhouette, she screamed...

David Mitchell

11:04

Caleb and Colin - I love the suspense!!

Alexsia and Myah

11:04

As I walked into the dark, cold, damp tunnel with my friends, one of my friends ran infront of us as quick as a cheater and stopped creepily with her hands on her hips and shouted, "run away or else!" So we ran quicker than she did. We heard footsteps so we turned around but she was gone two seconds later we got a wave of the scent of her favourite perfume......

Ben

11:04

When I slowly entered the creepy tunnel, I felt terrified, a girl appeared out of nowhere.

Isla and Alfie

11:04

The lava was seeking threw the volcano and quickly erupting on the land.

Martyna Hannah

11:04

As i got to my final location .I found a huge erupting volcano.

Harry and Alan

11:04

Around the fiery, humongous volcano was a soft, clean mist flowing off the volcano lava that was really warm pouring lava making the area as warm 100x warmer than a radiator.

Mr Greenwood

11:04

As I came to a clearing in the forest, I realised I was too late. The destructive lava had begun to cascade from the summit of the humongous volcano. I now knew it was only a matter of time until everything would be ash...

David Mitchell

11:04

Mr. Greenwood - I love how you have used the word cascade!

Isla and Alfie

11:04

When i got to the Volcano, I saw the lrva shooting up glorious bright fireworks

Kai and Kyle

11:05

As I looked up i saw standing a giant, spewing volcano

David Mitchell

11:05

Kai and Kyle - I like the word Spewing! Now tell me about how you were feeling as you approached the volcano.

Ben

11:05

As the moon shone brightly, the lava spilled down the rocks nearly wiping out the trees.

David Mitchell

11:05

Ben - That's a great sentence! How did that make you feel seeing that?

Jacob and Robert

11:06

As the lava dripped down the colossal volcano I hear the wolves howling in the mist of night.

David Mitchell

11:06

Jacob and Robert - Your best yet!

Murtadha and Kian

11:06

I run out side and run I feel lost in jungle staring at the gigantic volcano . I can see lava , slowly slothering down `the volcano

Caleb and Colin

11:06

While the volcano dripped down lava it was like blood dripping down an elbow. As it erupted, the forest swayed left and right like it was asking for help.

Martyna Hannah

11:06

As i got to my final location , i was to late for the erupting volcano

Ms Limbada

11:07

Good morning Yr 5.

Amy and Weier

11:11

As I walked past the doll looking girl in the damp, mouldy tunnel, I desperately gasped for air but I noticed I finally found the pot of gold that I was trying to looking for, but the only problem is that its on top of the huge, blood spewing volcano.

Aisha,Aleshia

11:11

I finally got there I was home but there was something different, it was nearly swallowed by the erupting volcano,lava pouring down at every side.

Ben

11:11

petrified

David Mitchell

11:12

Ben - Great! Well done!

Leah and Isabelle

11:12

As we finally reached are destination MOUNT DEATH, we inhaled the gasses but then saw little lights as we heard the evil laugh again ...

Isla and Alfie

11:12

when i got to the volcano, i saw the lava shooting up glorious bright fireworks.

Kai and Kyle

11:12

As i looked up to the sky I saw a gigantic volcano in the distance . When the volcano spewed out lava it looked like it touches the moon.

Keehan and Codie

11:12

As we get to our last destination,i felt pleasant and composed,but all of a sudden the volcano started to belch and larva was dripping down the side.

Kai and Kyle

11:12

As I looked up I saw a giant, dark volcano. I could see orange , burning lava and some giant , hot rocks.

Alexsia and Myah

11:12

As we escaped, I heard one of my friends scream so I turned around and every one was gone, so I ran towards the beaming lights for help. When I got there I heard a gun shot from behind me as the red, boiling lava spilled down the volcano

Fearne Georgia

11:13

As the lava was slowly dripping down the hot volcano the thick smoke came out.

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