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Mrs Lee
9:13
What sounds can you hear?
💖Stevie and Lexie 💖
9:13
The lava glows orange through the veins of the ginormous volcano, as smoke billows from its center. The ground vibrates, and ash fills the humid air, its difficult to breathe.
Mrs Cumming
9:13
Can you taste anything in the air?
Leon and Max 😜😎
9:13
I was as close as posible to be getting burnt by the lava but as quick as flash I ran my way to my car.
Lauren and Adam
9:14
As the volcano explodes all of the lava explodes evrywhere whith steam coming past evrywhere .
Mr. Mitchell
9:14
Can you think of another word for the second ' explodes' that you used?
Oliver and Maddie
9:14
Am I going to get out of here alive? This volcano is overwhelming and I don't know which to go for the best. Rivers of lava are pouring in every direction; i'm afraid!
Mr. Mitchell
9:14
Loving the rhetorical question!
Mr. Mitchell
9:15
Just 2 minutes left!
Bethany💙and Olivia😃
9:15
I could'nt believe what was ahead of me. A giant, sizzling volcano was standing furiously in front of me. My breath sharply stopped because of the overwelming amount of smoke i was inhaling. But suddenly the floor started the rumbled and decay away. What was happening to the floor?
Amy Rathi
9:15
Stevie and Lexie - lovely use of vocabulary. Well done.
Mr. Mitchell
9:15
Think about the noise, the rumbling or vibrations in the ground and the smell of the air.
Zak and James
9:15
As the volcano explodes there is heat waves coming from everywhere; my heart felt like that the lava was insider of me.
Mr. Mitchell
9:16
I like how you have really thought about describing  how you are feeling and the impact on your body! Well done!
Oliver and Maddie
9:16
Thank you Mr Mitchell
Mrs Cumming
9:16
Just look at the 4th sentence there, Bethany and Olivia
Rosie & Darcy 😍
9:16
I looked out the window and a volcano started to erupted my hart was pounding and then the lava started to come to my direction,what shall i do.
Alicia🌹 and Emily💖
9:16
I had explored for days and now as I meet my destination I also face my death. My face hurts with all of the heat coming from the volcano I have waited to see for years. I can not stop my heart booming like a drum or my breathe running away. The floor is a river of lava heading towards me. What shall I do? Fear has frozen me.
Mr. Mitchell
9:17
Nice placement of a simile! That worked really well!
Mr Brown
9:17
Oliver and Maddie great use of punctuation throughout your sentence. I agree with Mr Mitchell - rhetorical questions are a great tool to use when writing!
Freya And Charlotte ✨
9:17
Bursting with flames, the volcano was erupting faster than ever, I couldn't take it. As my eyes were closing, I dashed as fast and as far away as I could.
Mr. Mitchell
9:17
Fantastic opening word!
Leon and Max 😜😎
9:17
I wanted to discover more but I couldn't because  i was gonna get burnt
Mr. Mitchell
9:18
What about the word 'feared' after 'I'?'
Mrs Lee
9:18
Love the rumbling and sizzling,  Bethany and Olivia.
Mr. Mitchell
9:18
Right everyone, we are going to have to finish! Can I say a HUGE thank you and WELL DONE to you all! I hope you enjoyed showing off your writing to teachers 250 miles away?
Mrs Cumming
9:19
Rosie and Darcy, check through your punctuation. Great ideas!
Bethany💙and Olivia😃
9:19
I could'nt believe what was ahead of me. A giant, sizzling volcano was standing furiously in front of me. My breath sharply stopped because of the overwelming amount of smoke i was inhaling. But suddenly the floor started to rumble and decay away. What was happening to the floor?
❤Molly and Sophie ❤
9:19
Quaking in my boots, shocked with what was facing me and picking the ends of my fingers, I needed to think of an immediate plan.
Curtis Spencer🙊🙊
9:19
As the volcano erupts I run for life through the grey hot smoke following my friend because he knew the way out.
Bethany💙and Olivia😃
9:19
Thank you Mrs Lee.
Bobby 😐👻 Owain
9:19
I was hit in the face by the smell of what could of been 5 gallons of petrol, instantly realized that if I escaped this I would of been the luckiest man in the world, but to get into it i was the unluckiest. All of a sudden I started moving backwards and I realized I was running my legs off zooming away from the volcano, luckily I escaped. But I still could of died.
Mr McCulloch 👨‍💻
9:19
thank you everyone! Mr Mitchell and teachers! Can we have a copy of the transcript please??
Zak and James
9:19
Thank you bye.
Freya And Charlotte ✨
9:20
Thank you, Mr. Mitchell. Goodbye!
Mr McCulloch 👨‍💻
9:20
*Thank - punctuation has just been corrected!
Rosie & Darcy 😍
9:20
Thank you we had an a amazing time.
Lauren and Adam
9:20
Thank you  bye
Alicia🌹 and Emily💖
9:20
Thank you for Having us. Have a nice day.
❤Molly and Sophie ❤
9:20
Thank you for being with us for this lesson.  Have a good afternoon  and goodbye
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