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joshua
9:44
I did a lot of half a mile dog walks on my scooter
Mrs Cumming
9:45
So, you've got lots of ideas.
If I've not added your post, I've probably asked you to put some capitals in - check to see if I've replied to you. The little pencil icon will let you edit.
Kara
9:46
Does it have to be about you or can it be about someone else?
Mrs Cumming
9:46
That's up to you .
Lacey
9:47
Can we put pics on?
Mrs Cumming
9:47
Writing first, Lacey, then yes.
Ellie
9:47
Or when dad and I saved a pig stuck in mud
Lacey
9:47
Change my mind it was I went to wedding in Wales
Isabella A
9:47
My 8 mile bike ride
Thani
9:47
Ok
Kara
9:48
Okay, thanks. I am going to write about my sister.
Marley
9:48
im writing about corona lockdown thingy.
Ted
9:48
Climbing Mount Snowdon.
Marley
9:49
ok thanks
Mrs Cumming
9:49
Use capitals please, Marley
Mrs Cumming
9:51
Don't worry. Just make sure you put your capitals in please.
9:53
I want you to write a poem that's a bit like one of Michael Rosen's. What do you  normally think a poem looks like when it's written down? What might it look like on the page?
Jake
9:54
My dad made a doughnut cake it was AMAZING
Mrs Cumming
9:54
That's definitely worth writing about!
Alex
9:54
I got stuck in Florida because of a hurricane
Thani
9:54
Has it got to poem or a story.
Mrs Cumming
9:55
It will be both.
Ruby B
9:55
A new line for each sentence and you can sometimes see the rhyme.
Marley
9:55
A few words on each line.
Kara
9:56
A poem usually only has a few words on a line. It will probably look like a script mixed with a story.
Ted
9:56
Short sentences.
Ellie
9:56
Short sentences
Isabella A
9:56
What type of poem
Mrs Cumming
9:56
Any that we've looked at!
joshua
9:57
Short sentenses
Ruby B
9:57
It sometimes looks like a play script.😁
Niamh
9:57
It will probably look like a story.
Isabella A
9:57
Ok
Ellie
9:57
describing  words and sentences
Kara
9:57
Our poem will probably look like a script mixed with a story is what I meant to say.
Marley
9:58
oh ok when I played on my friends xbox all night and I had a sleepover round his a few months ago.
Isabella A
9:58
Like a acrostic
Ted
9:59
Adjectives and nouns.
Lacey
9:59
It will look like a poem with a story😺
Maxx
9:59
There will be long sentences on each line with some repeated words and rhyming words with some alteration too.
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