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Mrs Cumming
10:18
I think they are!
Thani
10:18
He uses his face the same and the sound
joshua
10:18
In dont he repeats dont a lot.
Kara
10:18
In strict Micheal repeats
Jake
10:18
In no breathing he says NO BREATHING
Mrs Cumming
10:19
There's almost a whole chorus that we all join in with!
Marley
10:19
Yeh I know what you mean and when he does that click noes when he finnishes eating a peace of chocolate cake.
Ruby B
10:19
"Cool just cool into the mouth nice" from Hot food.
Isabella A
10:19
I hope so Kara
Riley
10:19
The sound of a drawer closing
Kara
10:19
In strict Micheal repeats the weak kids, the whiny kids, the other kids and me a lot.
joshua
10:19
He also repeats go to bed.
Mrs Cumming
10:19
I forgot that one!
Jake
10:19
Yes there is
Thani
10:19
That's true Jake but also same acting
Ruby B
10:19
I agree Riley.
Maxx
10:19
Michael repeats *snap* nioce in hot food.
Ted
10:19
He repeats No BREATHING in strict.
Ruby B
10:20
The *slam* in the door from babysitter.
Niamh
10:20
He does alot.
Marley
10:20
Its funny in babbysitter when Micheal peaks his head round the end of the book.
joshua
10:21
And in the hollywood his dad repeated he wont eat it.
Riley
10:21
Floorboard creaking
Isabella A
10:21
I agree Marley
Mrs Cumming
10:21
When you write your story, do you think you could put something like that in? For example, if you were writing yours about a cat, you could repeat 'meowpurr' sometimes.
10:23
Nathaniel, maybe if you write about Finley, are there words he learned to say first and repeated a lot? You could put those in. Ellie, you could repeat the noise of the mud when Dad was trying to get that piglet out!
Kara
10:23
In trousers Micheal repeats the name of the mountain [ I think it's sugr loaf ] a lot.
Jake
10:23
When he fiddles with the keys in babysitter
Ruby B
10:23
😁He has a big grin on his face when he tricked his brother.😁
Ted
10:23
Yes, i'm looking forward to it.
Ruby B
10:23
Yes Definitely
joshua
10:23
I also agree with Marely.
Niamh
10:23
Same as a dog.
Kara
10:24
Yes that's a good idea. I could repeat the noise of the chocolate wrapper for the chocolate my sister sneakily ate for my story.
Jake
10:25
you could repeat rabbits noses twitching
Isabella A
10:25
If you where writing about your dog πŸ•. You could include barking
Thani
10:25
I agree Niamh
Marley
10:26
Good idea Isabella a.
Kara
10:26
Mrs Cumming could write a story poem about Snorkle and Dopple.
Mrs Cumming
10:26
They never do anything... they're both asleep here on the floor next to my chair!
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