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Story poem discussion

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Niamh

10:26

I'm going to change my poem to my baby sisters first birthday on Friday.

Alex

10:26

I could repeat the noise of wind.

Mrs Cumming

10:27

Ooo great idea

Ted

10:27

Good idea

Niamh

10:27

Yes, she could.

Isabella A

10:27

Thank you Marley

Ruby B

10:27

If you were eating apples then you could include crunching.

Mrs Cumming

10:27

Very good!

joshua

10:27

I yes good idea.

Marley

10:27

Yeh good idea and Mrs Cummings could wright she's getting on with her new house.

Ellie B

10:31

In the register It repeats Darren sit down a lot

Ruby B

10:31

That is exactly what my cats are doing right now.

Jake

10:31

good idea Mrs Cummings

Kara

10:31

Yes but you could make something up just for fun🐈.

Riley

10:31

good idea Ruby

Isabella A

10:31

Good idea Marley

Marley

10:31

You could wright how you are getting on with being stuck at home.

Kara

10:31

That's a good idea Marley. Maybe she can write about some of the things she's lost during the move. I think Micheal Rosen has written something similar.

Ruby B

10:31

I don't know maybe she could.

Thani

10:31

Mrs cumming when you eat do they all make the same noise

joshua

10:31

he he he my dog dosent move much my guinea pigs move loads exept for maria she dont move.

Isabella w

10:31

Good idea Ruby B.

Isabella A

10:31

I bet snorkel and Dopple are cute

Mrs Cumming

10:32

Oh yes. But lazy!

Ted

10:32

Will we do a lesson like this again because i'm enjoying it?

Mrs Cumming

10:32

Of course we can!

Ruby B

10:33

My cats can relate.

YAY

NJM

10:33

I have been doing this and maths at the same time.

Isabella A

10:33

I agreeTed

Ted

10:33

In Darren's car he repeats no Darren you can not be a car.

Yay

Riley

10:33

cant wait

Kara

10:33

It's really nice to be in contact with everyone because even if you have a brother/sister and you face-time it is still lonely.

Mrs Cumming

10:33

Have a think about that then.
Your job then this week is to write that short story, popping in a bit of repeated language. Try to imagine that you will perform it to a camera like Michael does - how would you say it? What would your face do? Will you do anything with your hands?
You CAN record it, either just voice or video, if you want to!
Please write on the blog and save as draft, so I can come and leave a comment. You can then do a second draft before submitting it.
If you want to start now, do, but remember you have Maths to do today too! Have a think, plan, and start in your English time tomorrow.

10:36

Off you go everyone! It's been good today. We will speak again soon! Thanks for coming online.

Kara

10:37

Okay thanks Mrs Cumming. This was really nice!😀

Ruby B

10:37

Got it thanks!! 👍😃 Bye Everyone.

Niamh

10:37

Okay.

Alex