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Glory
11:37
swaying trees
Lilly&annina
11:37
The snowy mountain,the blue sky
Josh & Debby
11:37
The swaying beautiful trees
cool 1
Glory
11:37
The trees are swaying from side to side
Kag…
11:37
Gushing ,cascading waterfall.
Glory
11:38
People slowly walking
Harvey and valena
11:38
Flowing, shiny water
Cohen & Nadia
11:38
The waterfall fell down at immense speed
Kag…
11:38
Flowing in great passion
Jonathan and Oliver
11:38
The person walking down the cobblestone path
Shaeden and Jack
11:38
The crytallised waterfalls flowing like magic
Glory
11:38
The waterfall is crashing down into a lake
Laken and Brian
11:38
The man is walking slowly past the beautiful mountain.
Diana&
11:38
the big black bird flying through the crystal blue sky f
Mr Shelton
11:38
Lovely! Don't forget your capital letter.
Inez and Luke
11:38
the crystal clear waterfall,glistening in the new blue sky flowing down the mountains peak
Harvey and valena
11:38
Flying birds in the cloudy sky
Lexi
11:38
Big, brown cabins
Lilly&annina
11:39
The person is watching the crystal blue sky
Cohen & Nadia
11:39
A lot of people talking together
Jonathan and Oliver
11:39
swaying trees in the sunset
Glory
11:39
beautiful flowers glowing in the morning
Lexi
11:39
Big, brown cabins standing tall
Oli & Emmanuel
11:39
The beautiful flowers
Denva Jackson
11:39
The beautiful, crystal blue waterfalls flowing down the luscious mountains
love 1
Mr Shelton
11:39
What a sentence!
Inez and Luke
11:39
the big,black bird flying across the big blue sky
Immy and Aj
11:40
The most blinding and shimmery waterfall with all of the birds gliding around it
love 2
Harvey and valena
11:40
morning sun shining over the world=]
Laken and Brian
11:40
The birds flying in to the blue sky,.
Diana&Nevaeh k
11:40
The brown,Woden cabin in a beautiful,magistic forest
trophy 3
Josh & Debby
11:40
The green swaying trees.
Jonathan and Oliver
11:40
Big black birds gliding through the sky
Mr Shelton
11:41
Great work Year 5. Ok now, we need some adverbs added to explain where, when or how these verbs are being done.  They will really improve your sentences.  Don't forget your full stops!
cool 3
Inez and Luke
11:42
The big,black bird flying over the crystal,clear sky.
Glory
11:42
Wet, shiny, green grass swishing from side to side.
Cohen & Nadia
11:42
Snow tumbled down the giant mountain with rapid speeds.
Oli & Emmanuel
11:42
The beautiful birds flew in the sky.
Glory
11:43
Sticks twitching.
Jonathan and Oliver
11:43
The wooden fences creaking at night
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