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Laken and Brian
11:43
The waterfall is flowing quietly.
Inez and Luke
11:43
The black birds singing in the dead of night
Harvey and valena
11:43
Red,wooden lodges sitting in the breeze
Cohen & Nadia
11:43
A bird flying around us and seeing everything we do
Inez and Luke
11:43
The brown cabin living happily on the long swaying grass.
Harvey and valena
11:43
The fence leaned over the emerald , bushes
Lilly&annina
11:43
in the afternoon the person was walking
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Kag…
11:44
Crashing waterfall,exceeding the beauty of the world
Mr Shelton
11:44
Wonderful sentence.
Lexi
11:44
Big, brown cabins standing tall swaying in the wind.
Glory
11:44
The luscious waterfall crashed down hard but calmly
Harvey and valena
11:44
Rays of sunlight glistening in the flowing water.
Jonathan and Oliver
11:44
The luscious mountain crumbiling
Denva Jackson
11:44
in the afternoon  the beautiful, crystal blue waterfalls flowing down the luscious mountains.
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Mr Shelton
11:45
Amazing work guys.  Don't forget to start your sentences with a capital letter.
Diana&Nevaeh k
11:45
The waterfall was splashing, nearly hitting the person that was walking down the magistic forest.
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Laken and Brian
11:45
Buy midday the waterfall calmly flowed into the blue stream on the forest floor.
Lilly&annina
11:45
in the afternoon the person was watching the waterfall crash towards each other.
Kag…
11:45
Such beauty puts me in a eternal joy.
Inez and Luke
11:45
The everlasting sky floats above all the worlds dreams.
Josh & Debby
11:46
Slowly,the crystal blue water came down waterfall
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Mr Shelton
11:46
Nice fronted adverbial.
Shaeden and Jack
11:46
really nice cabin
Harvey and valena
11:46
I love to see the class working so hard
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Mr Shelton
11:46
Me too!
Jonathan and Oliver
11:46
Mountain
Cohen & Nadia
11:46
The beautiful waterfall flows down the valley
Glory
11:47
The trees sway from side to side as the wind teaches it how to dance in it’s own way
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Mr Shelton
11:47
Wow! Amazing work!
Shaeden and Jack
11:47
crystal blue water
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Kag…
11:47
we’re just moths in a big dome exceeding light, so wonderfully.
Mr Shelton
11:49
Brilliant work Year 5.  Ok, we've got a new picture now.  Let's go straight in to creating more wonderful sentences to describe this image.  Remember the nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs.  Don't forget your punctuation!
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Jonathan and Oliver
11:49
The white fluffy clouds mirroring down
Inez and Luke
11:49
omg I also love seeing the class so quiet for once
Harvey and valena
11:50
The sun shines it light through the atmosphere and onto the land
Laken and Brian
11:50
The big blue glowing sky, with all the birds flying around it.
Shaeden and Jack
11:50
The spider are here
Harvey and valena
11:50
The moon shimmers as the howl of wolfs erupts through the night sky!!!
Lexi
11:50
A scary dark all way
Inez and Luke…
11:51
The round moon glistening in the darkens of the night.
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