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Megan & Oliver B
9:32
The teacher had slick, black hair.
Niamh & Jonah
9:32
The fluffy, bad dog ran into the tree!
Gracie & Olivia
9:32
Yesterday I saw a bright, colourful rainbow.
Mr Gilbertson
9:32
Good use of a fronted adverbial.
Michael & Callum
9:32
The fat, black, cat ate a rat.
William & Tom G
9:32
The cute, chubby hamster sat in his bath
Niamh j & Lucy
9:32
The teacher had black, silky hair.
TomC & Scarlett
9:32
There was a giant, blue elephant in the park.
Jaike & Lewis
9:32
Yesterday, I saw a bright, ginger fat cat sitting next to me.
Courtney & Frank
9:32
Last night, I saw a fluffy, fat dog
Mr Gilbertson
9:32
Ok, listen for your next instruction.
9:33
This time I would like you to use a comma after a fronted adverbial.
For example:
After eating his dinner, the boy played football on the playground.
Megan & Oliver B
9:34
Yesterday, I went to the zoo and saw a giraffe with a long, hairy neck.
Declan & Meda
9:34
Today, I rode my bike to school.
Mr Gilbertson
9:34
Try to make your fronted adverbials a little more interesting.
Jaike & Lewis
9:34
Today, I saw Mr Gilbertson with something on his arm, it looked terrible.
Mr Gilbertson
9:34
Good use of commas boys!
Grace & James
9:35
Last night, I played minecraft.
Niamh & Jonah
9:35
After visiting the hospital, I came home with a sling due to my fractured wrist.
Mr Gilbertson
9:35
Excellent sentence with a great example of a fronted adverbial.
Freya&Ethan
9:35
On Saturday, I spent the night at my best friends party.
Evie O & Jacob
9:35
Suddenly, the coconuts started falling from the tall, vibrant tree .
Mr Gilbertson
9:35
A fronted adverbial and an expanded noun phrase. Great work!
OliverC & LucasA
9:35
After confessing, I felt better.
Evie & Billy
9:35
After having a bath, I played with Johnny my next door neighbor.
Gracie & Olivia
9:36
Tomorrow, we are dressing up as characters from a book because it is world book day.
TomC & Scarlett
9:36
Tomorrow, it’s world book day I am dressing as Matilda .
Jaike & Lewis
9:36
After visiting my dads freind, we went to a restaurant and ate there, we were full
Mr Gilbertson
9:36
Another brilliant one.
Lots of you are forgetting the full stop at the end of the sentence.
Niamh j & Lucy
9:36
As quick as a flash, the cheetah ran across the forest.
Mr Gilbertson
9:36
Brilliant sentence Niamh and Lucy.
Declan & Meda
9:37
Walking through the dark forest, I saw something I didn’t like.
Kate & Tyler
9:37
The green monster, had giant feet.
Megan & Oliver B
9:37
Suddenly, the door opened with a frightening creek.
Evie O & Jacob
9:37
Down the hall way, the haunted, creepy doll sat .
Mr Gilbertson
9:37
Good use of an expanded noun phrase.
Courtney & Frank
9:37
Over the hills, was a great, big and soggy monster.
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