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Evie & Billy
9:37
After my run, I met a cow.
Mr Gilbertson
9:37
Next instruction coming up...
9:38
Mr Gilbertson, who had hurt his wrist, struggled to type on the keyboard.
Courtney & Frank
9:40
Jeff, who had rolled down the hill, hurt his arm.
Jaike & Lewis
9:40
The new teacher, who looked strict, was teaching us.
Mr Gilbertson
9:41
Well done Courtney, Frank, Jaike and Lewis.
Megan & Oliver B
9:41
My grandma, when she broke her arm, could not make curry.
Mr Gilbertson
9:42
Well done Megan and Oliver
9:43
You understand how to use a parenthesis.
Evie O & Jacob
9:45
The baby giraffe, who was just born, had token his first tiny steps .
Gracie & Olivia
9:45
Barry, who had started going to the gym, hurt his back.
OliverC & LucasA
9:45
Angus Young , a guitarist, played in AC/DC
Michael & Callum
9:45
Michael & Callum, who really liked this activity on the iPads, struggled coming up with sentences.
Mr Gilbertson
9:45
Interesting sentence, but great use of commas to indicate parenthesis.
Grace & James
9:45
Bob, who hurt his leg, struggled to walk up the stairs.
Evie & Billy
9:45
Evie and billy, who were absolutely amazing, loved chocolate.
Freya&Ethan
9:46
On Monday, John, the dad of josh, was angry after the argument.
William & Tom G
9:46
The chicken, who broke his chicken wing, cried loudly.
Freya&Ethan
9:46
Freya,who loves football, scored a goal.
TomC & Scarlett
9:46
TomC, who loved playing rugby, got into a big competition and won.
Declan & Meda
9:46
The kitten, who had been struggling to walk, found a new home.
Mr Gilbertson
9:47
Declan and Meda, you now have special powers!
Try to provide some feedback for others.
Megan & Oliver B
9:47
My little brother, who hurt my eye, is a cheeky monkey.
William & Tom G
9:47
The chicken, who broke his chicken wing, was in a lot of pain.
Niamh j & Lucy
9:47
After finishing are book, The Nowhere Emporium, we decided to write a page 9 and a half.
Mr Gilbertson
9:47
Good work girls, well done for using capital letters in the correct places.
Courtney & Frank
9:48
Bobby Pin, who had to get his wisdom teeth removed, was acting odder than usual!
Evie O & Jacob
9:48
The cat, who was owned by Postman Pat, had just visited the vets .
Gracie & Olivia
9:48
Year 5, who are going to Chester camping, are very excited.
Kate & Tyler
9:48
My sister, who eats all the chocolate, is very mean.
Megan & Oliver B
9:48
Donald trump, who is the president of America, is building a wall.
Gracie & Olivia
9:48
Garry, who is my dads friend, loved to eat cake.
Jaike & Lewis
9:48
Lewis, who plays football, is a goalkeeper.
Mr Gilbertson
9:48
Next instruction coming up.....
9:49
Can you use a comma before a conjunction?
For example:
The girl liked singing, but was afraid to go on stage.
Grace & James
9:50
My cheerleading competition is next week, but I’m scared of the judges.
Mr Gilbertson
9:50
Brilliant use of a comma before a conjuction guys.
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