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Alyssa and Austin
10:01
The enormous ,green mountain 🏔.
Mufaro and Emily
10:01
The sun-hiding,colossal leaf roof over head
Mr Shelton
10:01
I've very impressed with your adjectives Year 4.  Can you now write some equally impressive verbs to tell me what your noun is doing.  Add it to your noun phrase to create a sentence.  Don't forget your punctuation.
Katie, Myla and eva
10:02
The colossal,steep mountains.🏔
Lewis and Nathan
10:02
Marvellous,grey mountains
Tyler,FrankieM and Andrew
10:02
👁👄👁
Daniel.w
10:02
white, tall clouds
Holly mae
10:02
Blue sky with white soft,fluffy clowds
Borys and GERARD
10:02
The tall,massive mountins.
Katie, Myla and eva
10:02
The tall, exotic trees reaching to the sky
MalcolmZ
10:02
The luscious,green leaves waved in the wind
Mr Shelton
10:03
Great sentence! What should this sentence finish with?
Mia and zac
10:03
The towering, vicious mountains
MalcolmZ
10:03
The luscious, green leaves waved in the wind.
Mufaro and Emily
10:03
The fluffy white clouds was moving so the sky could be seen.
Mr Shelton
10:04
Nice sentence.  Is 'was' the correct word to use if there are more than one cloud?
Daniel.w
10:04
White, gliding clouds
Mia and zac
10:04
Full stop
Michalina natasha zajfert
10:04
The exotic green emerald trees shaming Zakinthos in the spot
Katie, Myla and eva
10:04
The tall,exotic trees reaching for the baby blue sky.
Emilia
10:04
The hard ,prickly roots were growing lower every day
Mufaro and Emily
10:04
The fluffy,white clouds were moving so the sky could be seen.
Mr Shelton
10:05
Well spotted!
Austin and Alyssa
10:05
The colossal, sharp, edged mountain towered over the luscious, emerald , green palm trees.
Ciaran and frankie
10:05
The jagged,pointy mountains 🏔 stairing
Tyler,FrankieM and Andrew
10:05
The vibrant,cool tree frog.        👁👄👁
Alyssa and Austin
10:06
The enormous mountain blocked the brute sun in the ske.
Daniel.w
10:06
tall, proud trees
Mia and zac
10:06
The prickly old roots ripped through the ground
Full stop
Ciaran and frankie
10:06
The jagged,pointy,mountains starring at the soft,fluffy,clouds
Tyler,FrankieM and Andrew
10:06
The succulent coconuts swayed in the wind
Emilia
10:07
The hard ,prickly roots were growing lower beneath the ground every day.
Borys and GERARD
10:07
The big tree with moving lime,small leaves.
Mr Shelton
10:07
Wonderful sentences being constructed now Year 4.  Can you improve them even more by including an adverb to describe how the verb is being done?
Holly mae
10:09
The exotic magestic vine was moveing   in the  wind.
Mr Shelton
10:09
Wow! What a sentence! Well done Holly.
Lewis and Nathan
10:09
The luscious,enchanted , emerald vines sprouted from the tree
Katie, Myla and eva
10:09
The colossal,steep mountain stood still in the wind
Mufaro and Emily
10:09
The fluffy ,white clouds were moving slowly so the sky could be seen.
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