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Year 4 Transition Writing Activity
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Tyler,FrankieM and Andrew
10:10
The enormous,grey mountains that blocked the bride sun :)
Borys and GERARD
10:10
The big tree with quitely moving leavs
Mia and zac
10:10
Slowly the trees grew year after year.
Austin and Alyssa
10:10
The luscious, emerald palm trees grew slowly in the tranquility
Tyler,FrankieM and Andrew
10:10
The enormous,grey mountains blocked the bright sun
Ciaran and frankie
10:10
The jagged,pointy,mountains starring creepily at the soft,fluffy,clouds
Mr Shelton
10:12
Amazing sentences Year 4!  Can you use the same method to build some sentences for this picture.  Try to include a noun, adjective, verb and adverb.
Tyler,FrankieM and Andrew
10:12
The enormous mountains
Daniel.w
10:12
The enchanted magical trees
Holly mae
10:12
Quietly the magestic,fluffy ,white clowds moved in the sky.☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Alyssa and Austin
10:13
The mountain quickly got bigger.It’s going to block the sun.
MalcolmZ
10:13
The roots from the trees slowly grew beneath the ground
Emilia
10:13
The hard, prickly roots were slowly and carefully growing lower beneath the ground every second of the day.
Lewis and Nathan
10:13
The tranquil,exotic waterfall slowly came down
Borys and GERARD
10:13
The Quit sky
Ciaran and frankie
10:13
The majestic,tranquil,waterfall moving softly
Mufaro and Emily
10:14
The flashing, explosive thunder rapidly crashed to the ground
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Tyler,FrankieM and Andrew
10:14
The stormy lightning
Ciaran and frankie
10:15
The vicious,stormy,lightning attacking the beautiful island.
Katie, Myla and eva
10:16
The lightning crashed  and made r
Tyler,FrankieM and Andrew
10:16
The lightning struck the dull ,ground under the green,tall tree.
Holly mae
10:16
The roots from the trees 🌲 popt out from the smoking whet dark brown mud
Lewis and Nathan
10:16
The rough poring rain came down slowly by the green trees.
Mufaro and Emily
10:16
The wet,splashy rain quickly fell down onto the ground.
Daniel.w
10:16
The creepy, scary storm destroying everything in its path letting nothing survive
Mr Shelton
10:17
What a sentece! Very descriptive.
Alyssa and Austin
10:18
The lightning quickly put the tull,wet trees on fire.
Michalina natasha zajfert
10:18
Thunder
Katie, Myla and eva
10:18
The lightning crashed and made the whole earth shake.
Mufaro and Emily
10:18
The colossal, towering trees carrying the leaf roof on top slowly shivered in the rain
Holly mae
10:18
Well done daniel.☺️
MalcolmZ
10:18
The heavy,tropical rain violently lashed towards the ground.
Mr Shelton
10:19
Very impressive Malcom.  Could you use the adverb somewhere else in the sentence?  Would this improve the sentence?
Mufaro and Emily
10:19
The dark dusty fog made it hard for the people to see.
Tyler,FrankieM and Andrew
10:19
The dark,yellow lightning struck the ground multiple times
Lewis and Nathan
10:19
The rapidly,majestic rain pored down from fluffy,white clouds.
Daniel.w
10:19
the beautiful rainforest with wild life for miles and wild life
Mr Shelton
10:21
Ok Year 4 you are blowing my socks off! Another image now.  What sentences can you use to describe this picture?
Mufaro and Emily
10:21
The jagged, sun-covering mountains towered over the greewnp
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