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Emilia
10:21
The sharp, quick lightning struck the wet ,green trees with a lot of force and scared all the animals out of the forest.
Katie, Myla and eva
10:21
The storming rain crashed down onto the exotic rainforest trees.
Mia and zac
10:21
The lightening, struck towards the majestic, butifull moutian.
Holly mae
10:21
Daniel I loved your sentence.☺️☺️☺️☺️👍👍👍
Borys and GERARD
10:22
The yellow lighting crashing to the big trees in the bad,loudly rain.And lots off animals can’t survive because the lightning killed them to death.
Mufaro and Emily
10:22
green* ground-hiding floor
Michalina natasha zajfert
10:22
yellow golden thunder
Ciaran and frankie
10:22
The strict,ferocious clouds thrashing down on the poor helpless island
Tyler,FrankieM and Andrew
10:24
The majestic,orange orangotang swung on the green he
Mufaro and Emily
10:25
The orange playful  orangutan
Lewis and Nathan
10:25
The fluffy,cute orangutan jumped vine to vine.
MalcolmZ
10:25
Violently the heavy,tropical rain lashed towards the squelchy,disgusting ground.
Mr Shelton
10:25
Good use of a fronted adverbial.  You could use some punctuation after your fronted adverbial though.
Daniel.w
10:25
A beautiful animal jumping from tree to tree
Katie, Myla and eva
10:25
The bright orange orangutan swung from vine to vine.
Tyler,FrankieM and Andrew
10:25
The majestic,orange orangetang swung off the green,luscious vine .
Mufaro and Emily
10:26
The  playful, orange orangutan slowly swung to eat his lunch.
MalcolmZ
10:26
The protective mother
Emilia
10:26
The brown ,energetic orangutan was leaping from left to right with a helpless baby orangutan clinging on to there mothers lovly soft fer
Mia and zac
10:26
The monkey swung through the exotic,enralld,   green vins with her baby monkey clinging on her.
Mr Shelton
10:27
Lovely sentence.  Just be careful with your spelling of vines.
Mufaro and Emily
10:28
The strong, spindly vines let the mother orangutan hand on them to send her back to the home.
Tyler,FrankieM and Andrew
10:28
The fluffy rangatang swinging of trees.
Michalina Natasha zajfert
10:28
Baba monkey
Alyssa and Austin
10:28
The orange monkey quickly swag to the tree.
Mufaro and Emily
10:28
Quickly
Ciaran and frankie
10:29
The orangutan swung happily from vine to vine.
Katie, Myla and eva
10:29
The bright orange orangutan swung joyfully from vine to vine with it’s baby.
Lewis and Nathan
10:30
The playful,adorable orange orangutan slowly, leaped from vine to vine
Tyler,FrankieM and Andrew
10:31
The bright,orange arangotang swung off dark,green vines andrew
Guest
10:32
The brave ,loving baby clinging on to an overprotective mother swinging left to right on the long stretching vines.
Holly mae
10:34
The baby is cuddling it’s mamma.☺️☺️🤭🥹🥹
Mufaro and Emily
10:34
The towering lovely trees slowly waved from side to side and the orangutan’s loved to climb the trees.
Mia and zac
10:34
The money swinging through the vines trining to get her baby food.
Borys and GERARD
10:34
The small  monkey climbing the trees in the badly,loudly rain in Amazon rainforest.living in night and sleeps. And they are big.
MalcolmZ
10:34
The overprotective,loving mother kept her small,helpless baby safe
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