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Mrs Murrin
10:23
Louis, where will that mirror take him?
Mrs James
10:23
Igor, what made the shop messy?  What did the shop owner have to step over?
Mrs Kilgour
10:23
Pen Pen - I love your verb 'teetering'! Where is a 'fragile' tea cup going to take the reader? How will this link?
Robert LEH
10:23
I entered the forest, and inside one of the trees I saw a golden totem shimmering against the moonlight and stood like it was waiting for me to touch it...
Harry - SWW.
10:23
As Ted wandered into the small antic shop he saw hollow wooden mask Ted walked to then touched and at the speed of a cheetah he was GONE!
Rebecca From Bunel Class
10:23
Willow was walking warily when she noticed a box. She opened it and...
Freya llangorse school
10:23
Rose, stood in the old antique shop then suddenly a draw in a patterned desk started to glow.
ChloeCNC
10:23
Amongst all of the clutter in the smelly, old antique shop, Millie couldn't help but notice a colossal claw. It had shimmery icicles building up in the crevices.
Rosie
10:23
As my fingers brushed it, I felt like I had been catapulted into it. This was the crystal world.
Freya pensby primary school
10:23
Archie woke up wondering were he was. All around him was land.
Abigail/Kilmington
10:23
Tatiana picked up the magical bowls and disappeared...
Sachin-Warren Road
10:23
Very soon, I was buried in sand dunes. A sandstorm whipped the desert as I struggled to stand up.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary
10:23
A moment later, she was standing on a mountain of snow. Sallie stared around her in shock, and then at the bowl in her hands. She cursed herself, spotting a shimmering snowflake engraved on it. It had obviously transported her here. But where was here?
Mrs Sawyer
10:23
Seb F - like your alliteration.
Louie summerfields
10:23
Max put the mask on and .........
Mr Headley Delves
10:23
Hi Lucas, I like the use of 'nestled'.
Ava and Della
10:23
Izzy saw a small bronze pot In the corner of the antiques shop.
Alice westfield school
10:23
ashley saw a mysterious clear bottle she touched it and felt so dizzy
Ida
10:24
She noticed the  teddy bear with one eye. Mysteriously she recognised it ...
Rylee summerfileds
10:24
I went home and plugged it in and I got sucked into a land of of lights and lamps.
Alice
10:24
The rusty nail letters spelt the word “fragile: handle contents with care. Or else...”
Maggie SWW
10:24
I spotted a mask carved intricately out of wood, and stretched out my hands to grasp it.
Bella
10:24
Elisa stared at the eyes of rush on doll
Guest
10:24
Olivia noticed a small crystal on the old dusty shelf in her sisters bedroom...
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:24
Oakleigh - how did it feel? Cold? Hot? Did it make him shiver?
Mrs Wojciechowska
10:24
Igor, I like your fronted adverbial.
Freya pensby primary school
10:24
He did not know where he was.....
Joshua Mackenzie NSJ
10:24
Bob entered the shop touched the trophey and then instentley got transported in the trothey but the trophey was massive
Mrs Sawyer
10:24
Ida - like the detail of the teddy with one eye.
Mrs Kilgour
10:24
Freya - I like the teaser with 'land'. Now, describe the land ... what is it like? What makes it strange?
Seb F - Falx Hill Junior School
10:24
I stretched out to touch it...
Ms McCarron
10:24
Rayah-just check your punctuation to improve the flow of your lovely sentence.
Devon
10:24
I soon as I had touched it, a purple most consumed me.
Mila - JMPS
10:24
Louise spotted a Russian doll. it had engraved eyes and a petite nose.
India (Pensby Primary)
10:24
Beth stepped slowly forward and touched the tea set. She poured herself some tea. It’s not bad, thought Beth. Suddenly she felt funny. The tea left in the cup turned a slime green. She felt sick. And then...she disappeared.
Daisy LEH
10:24
As soon a she shook it she was no longer in the.shop
Mr Headley Delves
10:24
Hi Bethany, I like the alliteration of 'shimmering snowflake'.
Elsa
10:24
I spotted a Emerald butterfly broach glistening in the sun. I slowly walked towards it and a sudden spinning sensation took over me...
arthur richards@oaksey school
10:24
Oscar that is amazing can u put some more info in
Mrs D
10:24
Freya  - An excellent extension to your original sentence!  I want to know what happens next...
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