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Ellie(thorntree)
10:24
As soon as Luna set foot in the dusty antique shop she was gravitated towards a dainty teacup;when she picked it up she realised that she was not in Mr Toms antique store anymore.
Igor (Thorntree Primary School)
10:24
Slowly he stretched his arm out to pick it up inspect it, he picked it up and it stopped glowing.
Mrs James
10:24
Sophia - great ideas for a portal.  Read your work aloud and see where you can add some punctuation.  Sometimes, long sentences lose focus.
chloe
10:24
sararh saw a an old chest as she went up to it... it had a gold rims a pure silver lock. she opend it. "WOW" she said it was a globe a magic globe it changed coulor BOOM she was sucked in in side was a lage tree the leaves were purple and in it was a  bih how with the book of kidoms (lost kindoms)...
aidan
10:24
The creepy man walked towards me and as soon as he touched me I disappeared into a endless maze.
George Llandogo
10:24
John tripped over a twig entwined with weeds and ivy. He pulled it up an the ground swung down to reaveal a gold box engraved with Ogham writing. He reached down to touch it and was suddenly transported to a magical world.
Sophie
10:24
She saw a mirror sparkling in the sunlight. It shimmered inviting you to touch it.
Mrs Murrin
10:24
Maggie, where will that mask take you? Could its intricate appearance be a clue?
Emily - Summerfields Primary
10:24
She cautiously walked up to the ancient book and slowly touched it, everything around her collapsed and a new world formed around her...
Larraine H
10:24
Jamie -cams lane - Great writing. Can you say something more about the stone statues in the first sentence? Loved the last sentence - good work here.
Mrs. B NSJ
10:24
I love the word 'nestled' Lucas
Guest
10:25
I heared your story and i really liked it thank you
Mrs Smith, Malorees
10:25
Well done Oscar I like marine blue, what do you do next?  can you complete this?
Edith
10:25
He walked towards the drum, it was covered in a thick layer in dust.
Charlie (thorntree)
10:25
He noticed a small old coin glowing in a deserted street. He picked it up and was traveling at light speed into another dimension.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:25
Harry - I love 'crawled down his spine'.
Neve leh
10:25
My fingers reach out towards it, I had to...
6B Micklefield
10:25
Timmy noticed the antique cups and saucers delicately placed on top of one another. They look like prisoners lined up the camp of criminals. He felt a wave of electricity running through him. Moments later, he was standing on top of a mountain looking at the sun setting and the rabbits hopping past.
Kailen_Summerfields
10:25
George noticed a platinum snow globe, shinning magnificently in the sun.
Isla
10:25
Maddie noticed a painting of an old man, she looked into his eyes and…all she could see was mist.
Maisy
10:25
As he touched it he suddenly felt like he wasn't himself...
Nina S-H
10:25
Lila came over to the box there was something strange about it she just didn't know what.
Ollie SummerFields
10:25
I noticed in the corner of my eye  a blueish,greenish liquid and said drink next to it
Ted K.B Lionel Primary School
10:25
She saw flashes of time, WW2, WW1, The Black Death. Was this a time machine?
Kwaku Sacred Heart Battersea
10:25
David went into the abandoned shop. He placed his hand on the book with Egyptian hieroglyphs on it and felt chilld down his spine
William - JMPS
10:25
I spotted an out of place plastic chair, sitting, waiting. Waiting to transport anything that touches it.
Utkarsha- Warren Road
10:25
Jasper noticed a stone carved Buddha sitting on a red stool. Jewellery were carved beautifully. She felt the statue and the calmness. Suddenly, Jaspers appears on top of a mountain in Bhutan.
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:25
We are flying. It wasn't dirt, it was ashes! This phoenix is taking me somewhere. "I hope you don't mind me taking you to my home. We need your help, Serenity." It talks!
Mrs Kilgour
10:25
Edith - use a semi-colon to separate those two sentences - not a comma!
Larraine H
10:25
Pe Pen - great words-  fragile - and teetering
Mrs Wojciechowska
10:25
Isaiah, I like the colour link with scarlet and ruby.
Guest
10:25
sorry I forgot to write my name, I will write it again with my name.
Emily, Manor field
10:25
It was covered in dust but Maya couldn't resist. She reached out and touched it...
Oliver Pensby Primary
10:25
Blowing the dust away and placing a sweaty hand on one of the dolls Jack felt instantly nauseous. Before he knew what was happening he was spinning through time and space...
Ms McCarron
10:25
Oh Isla, I'm intrigued... what happens next?
Izzy SWW
10:25
I picked it up in a flick of a second, I went light headed.
Rowde primary school
10:25
Jersey- I saw a rag doll sitting there right infront of me then it come's alive and said come play with me
Mrs Sawyer
10:25
William - I like the repetition of waiting.
Shreesha
10:25
What should I do?
KaiDJS dinosaur
10:25
I can see old tea cups.
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