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Bethany Tatsfield Primary School
10:20
The one standing near the lift now. When he walks, each step is about two meters. See him now? Do you? The one in a business suit. His hair is smoothed over his eyes and he has a handkerchief, a lace one, suspended from his fist.
Kate
10:20
Take this guy for example. See him? The one who is wearing the jet- black cloak and has tousled hair the one who is shuffling into the lift.
Charlotte.D
10:20
Take this girl šŸ‘§šŸ¼ for example , the one with bouncy, curly hair and the the floral dress šŸ‘— holding a bunch of flowers šŸ’
Thomas G
10:20
Take this guy for example. The one who's skulking round in the corner of the square.The one who's glancing around,muttering something under his breath.The one who's dressed in black ,barely visible,trying not to draw attention to himself.
Edith
10:20
The one with the walking stick hobblingĀ Ā along and tangled hair.
Emily-Oaksey Class3
10:20
The one who is opening the car boot and almost fallingover!
India (Pensby Primary)
10:20
See that guy there, yes over there. Heā€™s the odd one out. His cloak falls down his back like the wind on a stormy day.
Abigail (9) northmead
10:20
Take this girl for example, her rust coloured dungarees with a rainbow t shirt . She was walking to a light then stopped and I turned she was up on the light .
CJ from CJS
10:20
Take this guy for example... do you see him? Heā€™s got a orange lanyard. Looking at the green capped lady. Can you see him? Wearing glasses. Must have bad eyesight!
wilfred
10:21
like that strange man. You know that bloke with hair that looks like weird bits of rag. See look now he exsamining those bottles of beer.
Arthur
10:21
Look at those boots, did he walk here?
Mrs Pearce
10:21
@Sachi - Love the idea of your character having an injury and wondering why...but I don't know what you mean by his leg wobbling like jelly - what does that look like?
Ted K.B
10:21
His legs are black and blue all overĀ Ā and he's trying to hide it but it's very obvious.
Rebecca From Bunel Class
10:21
Take this man for example. See him? The one who look like his from the 1820s apart from the bright yellow coat.
Sachin
10:21
@Edith Any particular shades?
Shreesha
10:21
Take this boy for example, can you see him? The one who is sitting slowly on the chair eating? He is the one who stole all the food from the cooks int he hotel.
James, Ballacottier.
10:21
Take this guy, for example. Look at him. The one with the dark black coat, hood covering his face, stalking the crowds eagerly with a demon-like eye.
Izzy SWW
10:21
See her, the one who is dressed all nice. Where couldĀ Ā she be going?
Beabop
10:21
@Marth I love "walks and whispers"
Emily-Oaksey Class3
10:21
the one who is getting in the car
Oliver screen sww
10:21
Look her pure white hair stood as still.
Mrs James
10:21
Felix, hustle and bustle - great phrase.Ā Ā It gives the description a rhythm which captures the reader's attention.Ā Ā Well done.
Benjamin sww
10:21
See that man that has a long caip that gets tripped by the caip.
Mr Walker
10:21
Bethany - lovely description of the hankerchief; it tells me more about the character.
Katie Wychwood CE Primary
10:21
Take this guy for example. The one pushing through with a dead leg
Amelia.E
10:21
Take this boy for example. Can you see him? He's the one who is waiting for his turn in the busy queue.
Mr Sutton
10:21
Britney, have you heard that metaphor before? Could you come up with a new one?
Liam
10:21
Take this guy for instance, getting himself out of the dog house with flowers.
Isla
10:21
You know, that one with shaun and long robe, look at his emerald green eyes that are staring at us closely.
Rosie SwW
10:21
The gentelmanĀ Ā who is bold and wears glasses. He has a green turousie top.
Amelia
10:21
Take this guy for example. See him? The one who is wearing the dull brown raincoat and holding the box? I think it is a game. Jamanji I think...
Mrs Shirtliff
10:21
Arthur - I love that about the boots. Is it because they look hard to walk in, or because they look like they've walked miles?
Freya pensby primary school
10:21
The one dripping water off his soaked hud. Strolling through the building like owns the place
George-WR
10:21
... has just walked through security past the ordinary people though he is the most unordinary person you will find.You know the one in the ripped jeans, leather coat and slicked hair
Mrs Pearce
10:21
@kate I love the verb 'shuffling' because it tells me that maybe your character is trying to hife
Jamie Thornton
10:21
The one who is wearing a dark droopy cloak with a suitcase clutched to his hand fiercely. The one that is walking across the majestic marble floor that was created 100s of years ago.
George Llandogo
10:21
Take this guy for example. You got him? The one with the polished shoes.
Jacob
10:21
Thank you again Mrs James!
Mrs Eltringham
10:21
Niamh - that's great - I can see it!
Mrs Pearce
10:21
@kate - should say hide
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