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Gina

10:21

The one with a scruffy dog hiding behind him. The poor little thing looks like he hasn't had a bath in his life.

Jonathan

10:21

Take this man do you see him the one the man with the black marsk and cloak?

Mr Sutton

10:22

Liam: nice image!

Sachin

10:22

@Harry-SWW what is he wearing?

Arthur

10:22

You see those gnarled hands and hairy wrists, he could be a bear.

Beabop

10:22

He looks familiar. Have I seen him before?

Nina

10:22

Take this girl for example, she looks like she can't take another step the one wearing a ripped dress.

Bethany Tatsfield Primary School

10:22

He has now pulled a dark bowler hat over his eyes, his dull, lifeless eyes that are black and evil. His pupils are a deathly red and, if you look closely, his white gloves are smeared with blood. It is dry, but it is blood. Proper blood.

Mr Walker

10:22

George - I like the question: You got him?

DoUgLaS

10:22

Take this guy for example. See him? The one who is walking away.

Sachi

10:22

Just look at him, his whole image is creepy. He's at a creepy hotel, he's a creepy man and, look! Over there! In his hands. He is holding a creepy package. Wait, its moving!

Olive

10:22

Take this man over there can you see him? He is wearing huge pink pineapple glasses

Tom

10:22

Take this guy for example, do you see him. He must be a sign

Nidharshna

10:22

The girl with colourful flowers and a beautiful pink dress.

Mrs James

10:22

George by asking the reader .... you got him? - really draws me in. Well done.

Maggie SWW

10:22

Take this lady for example - see her? The way her hair is so slickly slid back and whose nose is sharp and pointed.

Mrs Pearce

10:22

@gina - great idea to bring in a pet. Tell me more about the character now.

caitlin

10:22

The one who is wearing snake print all over. she is walking in to a clothing shop.she is caring a bag be it is not any old bag.The bag was very buffy it was a little bit open. but i wonder what it was.

Rose.W

10:22

Take this littel girl for example, the one with golden hair and a orange frilly skirt.

Mrs Hughes and Aneira

10:22

...the sad lady with the bright armful of flowers who's hugging her handbag strap with both worried hands.

Mrs Quantrill

10:22

Emily N- can you tell us one more thing that the girl with long hair is doing?

Utkarsha

10:22

The one who had a scar across their head like a river going across the planet.

Mrs Shirtliff

10:22

Arthur - lovely writing comparing his hairiness to a bear!

Mrs Ashley

10:22

Freya - I like the idea of a mysterious suitcase. Intriguing!

Ella from Class 3!

10:22

See her? She's the one who is always glaring at poor innocent children as if they are as annoying as a paper cut. You don't want to get on the wrong side of her, trust me....

Mrs Eltringham

10:22

Oliver - hair stood as still - can you describe standing up hair - like peaks of icing - only a suggestion!

Mrs Pearce

10:22

@Maggie I can really picture her. What is she doing?

Mr Sutton

10:23

Freya, can you think of another metaphor. I've heard that one before.

Mrs James

10:23

Caitlin, fantastic description of the snake print fabric. You have taken Pie's advice of 'naming'. It brings your writing alive.

Bethany Tatsfield Primary School

10:23

Thank you Mr Walker!! :)

Sachin

10:23

@IzzySWW How is she dressed all nice?

Sophie

10:23

Take this girl for example, see her? She looks miserable and sad and upset. she has blonde hair and is holding a bunch of flowers. Where I you going? I wonder...

Eleanor

10:23

Take this girl for example, you see her messy ,pilled on hair and hear her screeching before you see her long ripped dress like a living ghost.

Beabop

10:23

The hat, his stick and how he wears his black, gloomy glasses. I've seen it before I'm sure.

Ted K.B

10:23

He's looking on his phone, aimlessly scolling.

Kobe from Warren Road

10:23

The one whose hat was covering his entire face.

Hannah from Year 5

10:23

Bustling market towns are usually full of ordinary people, smiling and pointing in the right direction when you don't even ask. But that is't always the case. Take this guy, for example. Wearing a tattered cloak, never showing his face... the kind of person who you or I might scurry away from, but he still seems to give you a deadly stare. Weird.

Chloe -SWW

10:23

Is that the clockwork crow in there? And a tin of oil? It must of escaped from Cogheart! No! It escaped from Catherine Fisher's book.

Olivia

10:23

Look at this horde of people can you see anyone in particular who stands out? Take this girl for example. Can you see her?

Nathanael

10:23

Can you see the man and woman flower can you recognize them?

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