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Larraine
10:16
Jocelyn Good kenning speed bringer
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:16
Its teeth were bared, covered in red. The two prongs were huge. But its ears rubbed her hand. It really was her friend. How?
Rayyan
10:16
As furry as a fat fox
Guest
10:16
The cats wear one with the snow.
Aoife-clepington PS
10:16
The cats eyes were sparkly like a glitter ball.
Louie Summerfields Primary
10:16
ears as pointy as the apex of a mountain
Mrs James
10:16
Kaya - great use of the verb clashed.  You wouldn't normally use this for fur but it works really well here.
Harry Pensby Primary
10:16
As silent as snow falling on the ground.
Bispham Drive School
10:16
As fast as the speed of light, it pounced on it's oblivious prey. Riley
Lottie Stockland Primary
10:16
as fast as a kestrel swooping down on it's prey
Tilly / palace wood
10:16
The eyes gave a cold stare that could kill an elephant on the spot. The teeth were as sharp as a knife.
Fran
10:17
I was just talking a stroll in the snow, when a flash of amber caught my eye. I crept over; I had heard stories about cats as strong as weightlifters with claws like daggers.
Micklefield 6M
10:17
The amber eyes captured the silver stars.
Kitty Wright.
10:17
LuisWRPS maybe a capital letter at the start?
Florence - Weldon
10:17
The snow cats crept through the snow like burglars sneaking through a house.
Milly
10:17
they pounce as quickly as a mouse trap slamming shut
Toby B
10:17
The snow cat’s tail was like a snake which slithered through the air
Kit Sambridge
10:17
its clenching fists grabbed onto the cold , white snow
Miles D
10:17
Spots as dark as the black night.
Pie
10:17
Jessica love that original idea.
Avani
10:17
the piercing eyes cut through your eyes with fear
India (Pensby Primary
10:17
The cat’s tail were as thin as a pencil.
Leah
10:17
Claws as sharp as dragons teeth
Pie
10:17
Miles - shield is a new idea.
Oliver
10:17
tail flickering like a snake
Eliza W Stockland primary
10:17
The paw padder, snow shifter, deep, dark dense dipper
Aoife-clepington PS
10:17
His thick fur was as deep as the ocean.
Brooke
10:17
Claws as sharp as deadly blades.
Bridget
10:17
Snow cats came pounding out of the mist as fast a stooping falcon.
Elsie/ Tockwith Primary
10:18
Fur as soft as snow.
Freya pensby primary school
10:18
The frosty, Icy air. The prouncing cats chasing each other.
Billy
10:18
As sharp as a sword
Shreesha
10:18
They both, as strong as a lion, like a hunting, scratched, jumped, punched and kicked each other.
Jodie- Bowness on solway primary
10:18
dark eyes like the night sky reflected on water
Pie
10:18
Guy - shadow-chasers???
Alex
10:18
As white as the Soft,Cold snow.
Miles - JMPS
10:18
The snow cat plunges through the snow.
Ju-Ah SHPS NM
10:18
They pad as silent as the furthest stars in the sky.
Dylan - Linton
10:18
Teeth as deadly as a lethal dagger.
Jocelyn
10:18
ice scater
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