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Taha
10:32
My heart was beating out of my chest.
Rosie SwW
10:32
Asha was scared what was happeningfg
Mrs James
10:32
Charlotte - great idea.  Would it be more powerful if you had written this as two sentences e.g. A shiver ran down her spine.
Cassidy
10:32
Sarah held her breath.
hollybee
10:32
what was that
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:32
Erin charged! Her knife slid through it. Then she realised. DEMON! There was nothing she could do.
George-WR
10:32
Tick, tock, tick, tock, time was running away fast.
Mrs Shales, Belmont, Grantham
10:32
I heard the floorboard squeak.
Olivia st Teresa’s
10:32
COME ON !!!!!!!!! QUICK!!! I yelled at her. IVY!!!!! THE JEWEL!!!! Ivy stared in horror at .......
Mr Clark
10:32
Love the use of the short sentence!
Tallulah
10:32
Finally some peace to myself, she thought. Her parents were one and she was alone in the house. Or so she thought...
Mrs Kilgour
10:32
Sachi - great idea. What might the next sentence be then?
Freya llangorse school
10:33
The sky fell down upon them.
Izzy SWW
10:33
A shiver went down my spine. Someone was hear
Jasbinder
10:33
Larraine - good setting up a situation I want to find out about
Rebecca From Bunel Class (10)
10:33
Right at that moment, a giant cobra appeared "Aaah" April cried.
Fran
10:33
'Hands in the air,' growled a hooded figure, 'or your friend suffers.'
Mrs James
10:33
Larraine - great idea to 'tease' the reader when you say you cannot tell us.
Olivia
10:33
" Hide!" " He is coming!"
Felicia Q
10:33
Icy-cold,emaciated fingers grasped desperately at my arm,I turned to see...
Grace
10:33
The roaring silence was the loudest sound I'd ever heard and the hollow darkness ticked as I counted down the seconds.
Jack and Hannah
10:33
Crash.. Asha woke up from a deep sleep. She wasn’t in her room. She wasn’t in her bed. She was in the middle of a crowded market -and she was surrounded by shards of glass
Sophie
10:33
all of a sudden she poof went in mid air
Utkarsha
10:33
She turned around, she couldn’t believe what she saw.
Thomas G SK
10:33
"What, is, that?"
Oscar
10:33
As it moved moved closer she stood stone still.
India (Pensby Primary)
10:33
“Slowly I opened the door...”
Morgan....
10:33
sweat dripped down her face."Where am I?"
Sachin
10:33
Thomas drew his samurai sword from his leather scabbard as he prepared to defeat a monster from your nightmares.
Jessica
10:33
The lights flickered, suddenly.
Freya pensby primary school
10:33
My dreams were floating away up into the midnight sky.
Issie
10:33
Questions flooded my mine as I stared at the monster...
Mrs Kilgour
10:33
Izzy - which here - here or hear?
Isla
10:33
We stopped, "What's that?" Shiela said, shaking.
Mrs James
10:33
Tallulah - great tag sentence .... or so she thought ......
Hadley
10:33
I felt a cold shiver down my spine and goosebumps all over my arms and legs. My heart started to race and my palms started to sweat. I was paralysed with fear. Where was I?
Freya pensby primary school
10:33
Ow no
Mrs Shirtliff
10:33
Jack and Hannah - Crash! What a start!
Niamh a
10:33
I heard a sword swipe something in the distance. Who or what was it, what is it doing?
Nicholas S
10:33
Just when they thought they where safe...
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