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robyn
10:33
Suddenly the fog cleared and..............................................I saw a shadow
Hayden.w
10:33
She ran and ran and ran for 3 hours without stopping
Louis SWW
10:33
Goosebumps crawled up my back, someone was coming...
George-WR
10:33
Silence...
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:34
Cracking one word opener George!
Mr Clark
10:34
Great adverb use Davidson.
Mrs Kilgour
10:34
Issie - my goodness, I would have questions too! What might they be? Can you add them as rhetorical questions?
Utkarsha
10:34
What is that?
keerat
10:34
@Issie- wonderful sentence but should it be off?
Mr Clark
10:34
Yes, she is our 'Daisy'!
Jasbinder
10:34
Louis - nice use of the goosebumps - great image of them crawling!
George (11) Stockland Primary
10:34
My arm hairs stood on end and a cold bead of sweat slid down my face.
Kaya
10:34
Before a moments notice, the door burst open and she darted inside.
Emily, Manor field
10:34
A shiver ran down her spine as she spun around to face the intruder...
Larraine H
10:34
Freya llangorse school - What a great start - I am hooked.
Mrs James
10:34
Nicholas - I very much like this sentence - I am quite nervous to read on.  Well done.
Thomas G SK
10:34
BANG!
wilfred
10:34
Suddenly, i sprang out of bed thinking the the spiders that were streching there spindely legs in my nightmare were real!
Rosie SwW
10:34
Asha was scared what was happening?  Was she safe?
Bethany Tatsfield
10:34
We reached the car and bundled in, me squished in the middle, the air knocked out of me. Bea started the car and we hurtled up the road. "Can you drive?" I screamed, my face emerald. "NO," she cried, "I DON'T BUT I'LL TRY!"
Willow (8)
10:34
In the distance, the earth shook dangerously...
Mr Clark
10:34
Freddie, check your punctuation.
Oscar
10:34
As it moved towards her she stood stone still....
Mrs Collins
10:34
Thomas - you are really building the tension, well done!
India (Pensby Primary)
10:34
”Where am I? How did I get here?”
Jasbinder
10:34
George - nice - maybe a single bead of sweat?
Abigail (9) Lottie (6)
10:34
In a flash , the river was frozen , Amy turned and her sister was under the ice !
Mrs James
10:34
Rosie good use of rhetorical questions.
Chloe -SWW
10:34
Suddenly, a big paw with frightening claws grasped me.....
Rosie
10:34
...Something was moving towards me.
Niamh Osbaston CiW
10:34
"Something terrible has happened," gasped Annie. Her hands were on her chest, and her face was chalk white.
Hayden.w
10:34
She ran and ran and without stopping.
Issie
10:35
A shiver ran down my spine as I saw it.
Isobel
10:35
just run its coming for you hold my hand
Fran
10:35
A deathly scream rang through the corridor, piecing Brian's ears like a million knifes.
Eliza W Stockland primary
10:35
Esther awoke from her slumber. Was her dream true? No. It can't have been. Or was it?
Mrs Kilgour
10:35
Thomas - great onomatopeia!
George Llandogo
10:35
I woke up, my face stinging with cuts.
Emily
10:35
Suddenly, there was a bang in the basement
Eleanor
10:35
I was awoken by an unbearable sound like........an airplane?
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