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Mrs Shirtliff
10:35
Bethany - I love this. I want to know why they need to get away in such a hurry!
Mrs Eltringham
10:35
Emma B - great hook! Carry on- who is there?
Devon (9)
10:35
Every step she took made a loud noise. Slowly someone opened a door with a creeeeeeak!
Fran
10:35
Time was ticking.
niamh
10:35
s.k. NiamhBefore anyone could stop her  she vanished perhaps a forth dimension an another planet nobody new but what they did know was life was never going to be the same
Louis SWW
10:35
Heart pounding, I ran.
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:35
Erin screamed, "NO!" as she saw her friends limp body fall to the floor and wept. The demon walked to her...
Freya llangorse school
10:35
The feather glowed a sickly green before bursting into flame.
Abi
10:35
An ominous buzz came from the wall of the dark cell... then it came. It had begun
Emily, Manor field
10:35
Suddenly, a dark hooded shadow leapt out at her.
Emily
10:35
Strange noises were coming from the attic
Arthur SWW
10:35
A sticky, bright red liquid came under the door. Oh no. What have I done?
Onora
10:35
"It has never done it before, I am scared."
Mrs Hughes
10:35
To Arthur SWW - the panic is rising, the tension is mounting, it's going to get worse...
Emma B
10:35
I couldn't even breath as I was so scared he would hear me.
Mrs Collins
10:35
Some good use of short sentences for impact!
Lucy
10:35
I ran. Faster then I had ever run before. My heart felt like it would burst, but I didn't stop. I took a glance behind me. Someone, no, Something was coming, but what?
Seb F
10:35
In a flash...they were gone.
Thomas G SK
10:35
In the blink of an eye the tree was gone.
Edith
10:35
My heart pounded, and I could barley breathe.
Larraine H
10:35
Jack E   I love it. What would it be like if you just said he jumped? - so we didn't know where from.
Mrs James
10:35
Fran - short but really gives a sense of doom.
Gwen, South Kilvington
10:35
I began the long run across the dock, trying to get away.
Freya pensby primary school
10:35
A shiver ran down my spine! The hairs on the Back of my neck stood up.
Isla
10:35
Are you...
Mr Sands
10:35
Suddenly a blood-curdling howl ripped through the dark forest sky. Gerald began to tremble.
Freya pensby primary school
10:36
She froze!
Mrs Kilgour
10:36
Abi- what had begun? Exciting! Remember your full stop.
Shreesha
10:36
She is coming slowly to eat yooooouuuuuuu
Daisy st James
10:36
  • CRASH He is coming run
Liam
10:36
I jumped out of my skin, as my life flashed before me.
Rosie
10:36
...I couldn't move, I felt like I was stuck to the ground. I wanted to run!
Fran
10:36
Peering into the darkness, I spotted two red eyes staring out at me.
Emily
10:36
In a blink of an eye
Eliza W Stockland primary
10:36
The river engulfed something. Something or someone.
Jack and Hannah
10:36
The road beneath the cars tyres disappeared - they found themselves falling .. falling towards the deep, blue sea.
Bethany Tatsfield
10:36
We screeched round a corner and up another road, the wailing of sirens pursuing us.
Utkarsha
10:36
“Run for your life!”
Willow (8)
10:36
A shiver ran down my spine...
Winnie - SWW
10:36
Something grabbed me....
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