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Amelia-Grange park primary
10:26
There was no one to talk to. No one to play with. No one could understand me. I was alone.
Guest
10:26
I looked down.Only the floor felt safe and familiar.
Melody - Summerfields
10:26
She missed all of her friends at home, here, everyone glared at her as if she had just shouted at the head teacher.
Mrs Davison
10:26
Alice Q - I enjoyed the contrasting description of the birds and then how you even linked that to the people. It reminded me how even the things you take for granted will be the same, are not. Well done.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:26
Louie - good imagery - where could you have used a semi-colon?
Arthur SWW
10:26
Some slumped on benches browsing their phones, others kicking a football, all with their backs turned away from her.
Sachin-Warren Road
10:26
I felt like I was a new species of rare ants- everybody was towering and nobody was being welcoming.
Abigail
10:26
She said something or though I wasn’t sure. I felt bad for her so I used my hand beckon her to sit with me .
Naomi WHPS
10:26
She will miss the the lovely smell of the wildlife outside of her window now i can smell steam coming from vans and lorries.
Kailen_Summerfields
10:26
He missed the exotic taste of mangoes, now the taste of fruit was plain
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:26
Melody - could you have used a semi-colon?
Hollie - WHPS
10:26
He missed the joy of playing cricket at home ; he needed someone who could help him win.
Abigail/Kilmington
10:26
Everyone knew Alice as a nerd; but now everyone knows she is the centre of attention.
Erin W SWW
10:26
As I walked into my new school, I could smell the rechid school dinners.
Yuriy Sacred-Heart Battersea
10:26
My heart was rising, heads were slowly turning and looks of disgust began sprouting on their faces. All I wanted to have was a warm face smiling a me.
Gregory SPS
10:27
The boy walked into the class and everybody looked at him like they didn’t know what he was.
emily LEH
10:27
my heart felt like a shattered mirror with my brother leaving
Jake@John Moore Primary
10:27
He stepped into the room.  A sea of faces examined my different skin, different eye colour and different personality and language.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:27
Kailen - semi-colon - where could it go?
Shreesha
10:27
I went slowly but steady. The Minotaur didn't recognise me but I recognized it. It was sitting with sadness and anger. I didn't know what to do, go to the Minotaur - I can be in danger or should I run away - the Minotaur?
Erin Bispham Drive
10:27
I felt uncomfortable at the feeling of eyes staring at me, every corner I turned.
Emily, Manor field
10:27
She missed her friends, her family, her teachers.Here no-one liked her. She was safe in England, but lonely.
Guest
10:27
She came in, everybody looked and stared, she didnt feel right; she didnt fit in.
Guest
10:27
My heart screamed like a prisoner in a jail cell. I felt trapped in my new house. The walls with no gaps. My old house had gaps in the wall, all even. What was i going to do. All the children glared at me like i was a talking spider. The streets smelt of the Prison. It was Torture.
Nina S-H
10:27
The teacher told her to sit down next to me, the girl walked over and sat down.
Jess@John Moore Primary
10:27
I missed my friends and teachers.  I walked slowly past the unfamiliar faces and wished they would glare at anyone but me.
Emily - Summerfields Primary
10:27
I felt a sharp chill in my spine when I hesitantly sat down in the crooked chair..
Onora
10:27
They saw me and then people started to chat and then the teacher said "Go to your seats." A girl looked at me,I looked at her almost to say "Can I sit next to you?" She nodded and that was the start of a whole new friendship...
Mrs James
10:27
Arthur, great comparison with the children in the classroom.  You have shared how they looked differently.  How else could you compare them?  Do they behave differently?
Matteo
10:27
I looked down. Only the floor felt safe and familiar.
Igor- Thorntree
10:27
He missed the ways it had been before the movement; I looked around as I stepped into the cold, crowded classroom, pairs of rather un-welcoming eyes staring at me.
Guest
10:27
No one could understand me.
Eden
10:27
She sheepishly stepped into the classroom and every head turned to look. She had missed her friends.
Mrs Kilgour
10:27
Jake - I love the 'sea of faces' - great story language! 'Examined' gives the reader a clear idea of the power of their stares.
Mrs H Bispham Drive Junior
10:27
Georgina - which to/too for school? Great suspense at the end of your sentence.
Jake WHPS
10:28
He missed life on the farm with a cockerel waking him up every morning; but now, he is in a new life, alone without being woke up by the lovely sound.
keith
10:28
  • I'd feel really shy
  • I'd feel like a trapped person who couldn't escape
Issy@John Moore Primary
10:28
Everyone started at me.  I could see older children in the playground, laughing and pointing as I walked past them.
Hayden, Summerfields
10:28
I miss the passionate expression on my face everyday coming home from primary school, but high school, is different!
Kit yr4
10:28
I could feel the world turning like no other but my heart was beating as fast as a cheetah.
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