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Isla&Cossie
6:46
A crusty old spaceship has been there for years it’s that old that it rotted to pieces.
Hannah and Jack.
6:46
The ancient, wooden houses stood in the middle of the lost city of Atlantis. The closest city was far away and didn’t see the mermaid tail, who was worried because she losted her pack.
Mr Tinsley
6:47
Hannah and \Jack - who didn't see?
Mia & India
6:47
sore and heard
Leo & Charlie
6:47
The old oily rusty buildings look like they were turning 90° degrees every wave.
Josh and Imogen
6:47
Standing in the sea was a look out point, which would have been used in the army to see were there enemies are.
Luke and Callum
6:47
The dark sky was ingulfed the day .
Abigail
6:47
As he swam closer to the eerie sound,he gazed at what used to be an army base, which was now collapsing to the bottom of the ocean floor, ready to be taken out of history.
Isla&Cossie
6:48
The sea crashed against the rotted spaceship as the wind blew it down and then atom Callum came and destroyed it.
Kieran and Laurence
6:48
We took a boat to the area so we could investigate on it.When we looked at the windows in the towers we saw a monster peering out the window with luminous green eyes
Neve & Kacie
6:48
Under the waves, many sinking ships have been found and secrets have been found out.This could possibly be the last day of my life....
Isabelle H
6:48
Herrings and sea gulls swooped in and out of view as he lay on the patio, his eyes fixed on only the stars and his mind focusing on their meanings.
Isla&Cossie
6:48
The inside was manky, horrible, smelly and old. It was like a gas bomb exploded. The substant was like Aline drink.
Mr Tinsley
6:49
Abigail
6:49
As a giant box floated past me, I began to hear the sound of weeping coming from inside.
Leo & Charlie
6:49
The death rotten cabins clashed against the calm water.
Tom and Dan
6:49
As the wind blew, the old storage containers were swaying in every direction.
Luke and Callum
6:51
A body lay unpleasantly on the sand which let of a foul stench of death as a punishment.
Mr Tinsley
6:51
Luke and Callum - off or of?
Tom and Dan
6:52
The unusual character lay in the sand, dead.
Mr Tinsley
6:53
Tom and Dan - how did it get there? What was his body like? How did it die?
Abigail
6:53
When I walked onto the beach, I saw a man who was made out of macaroni. How did this happen to him? Where did he come from? There is so many questions I could ask.
Mr Tinsley
6:53
Abigial - so many questions that you can answer too
Luke and Callum
6:53
Off
Neve & Kacie
6:53
As the injured man stared into the distance, he could just make out a black figure heading towards him.
Leo & Charlie
6:53
The sandy man was buried because he tried to muder people.
Mr Tinsley
6:54
Leo and Charlie - more detail about how it came to this please. How did he end up in this situation?
Kieran and Laurence
6:54
This ancient metal thing you would think its a statue but its not you’ll surprised what it really is.
Mr Tinsley
6:54
Kieran and Laurence - PUNCTUATION PLEASE
Izzy and toni
6:54
Dipped in oil and left out in the sun, the man slowly baked and turned to rust, unable to move or speak.
Mr Tinsley
6:55
Izzy and Toni - excellent sentence
Hannah and Jack.
6:55
The brown, rotten stood still but sudden it crack and crack until a human appear. It was 12 feet tall, with blood red eyes, his face turn young instead of old. The people standing there, look in horror as he froze them.
Mr Tinsley
6:55
Hannah and Jack - the brown, rotten what?
Harrison
6:55
As people walked past the rusty old person they cried in feer.
Mr Tinsley
6:55
Harrision - fear
Isla&Cossie
6:55
An ancient piece that had the Aline substant. The Alines must have made this.
Mr Tinsley
6:56
Isla and Cossie - check your spelling and correct please
Isabelle H
6:56
”And what is that supposed to be?”, snarled Kim, kicking the crumpled paper balls off the desk, “ Not in a million years will I pay money for an army of them! I’d like to see how that would protect our kingdom!”
Neve & Kacie
6:56
As the man came closer and closer and closer my breath turned cold, my teeth began to chatter and my knees rocked from side to side...
Mr Tinsley
6:57
Neve and Kacie - you have an adverbial phrase in there but what should follow?
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