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Tianna and Grace🌹
8:45
yes! Slowly as the cloudy white fog crawls by, the trees sway and the lake sits still.
Mr Brown
8:45
Through the thick missed, sounds from the spooky forist made me freeze on the spot.
Mr. Mitchell
8:45
A new picture is coming in 1 minute, we will be entering the forest!
Bethany💙and Olivia😃
8:45
But inside the trees, were magical birds flapping their colossal wings. Their humming voices bouncing off the thick bark trees.
Alicia🌹 and Emily💖
8:45
Yes Mrs Lee.
❤Molly and Sophie ❤
8:46
As the long  sunny day came to a close ,  the dark misty forest, which smelled soggy , dancing in the wind .
Curtis Spencer🙊🙊
8:46
Yes me and Curtis are enjoying the activity.
💖Stevie and Lexie 💖
8:46
yes Mrs Lee
Curtis Spencer🙊🙊
8:46
Yes me
Mr. Mitchell
8:46
We are about to meet a character in this story. Feel free to describe her or the setting.
8:47
Freya And Charlotte ✨
8:47
Mrs Lee, yes we are enjoying this activity!
Mr. Mitchell
8:48
If you were here, how would you feel? Write as if you were writing the story.
Bethany💙and Olivia😃
8:48
Yes we are really enjoying it. Mrs Lee!
Mrs Cumming
8:48
Oliver, embraced is a great word to use there
Oliver
8:48
in -braced
Freya And Charlotte ✨
8:49
The Goddess of darkness, stood proud of her powerful surroundings.
Lauren and Adam
8:49
The deadly women standing in the distance with blood dripping down her black wicked dress the wind was blowing fast stricking like a eagle .
Rosie & Darcy 😍
8:49
This character looks like she has a dark soul and she looks like a vampire .
Mr. Mitchell
8:50
Name the character for me. Try to think of a name that reflects what you think she is like?
Leon and Max 😜😎
8:50
The vampire girl is relaxing in the darkness of the mysterious,creepy forest
Miss Skinner
8:50
Freya And Charlotte ✨
The Goddess of darkness, stood proud of her powerful surroundings. <-- do you need the comma?
Bethany💙and Olivia😃
8:50
The vampire looking women, glared at her vast wings, whilst something deadly was closing in...
Mrs Cumming
8:50
Freya and Charlotte - what do you think your goddess is like? What are her powers?
Mrs Lee
8:51
Rosie and Darcy. Great sentence which might have more impact if it was two short sentences????
❤Molly and Sophie ❤
8:51
The mysterious dark angel stands proudly in the middle of the haunted woods, with a soul as dark as night.
Oliver
8:51
A delicate figure in black, stands alone, arms out stretched while holding the ends of her crcohered shawl.
Rosie & Darcy 😍
8:51
We would call this character Victoria dark soul.
Mr. Mitchell
8:52
Write the sentence again for me using the name. Let's see what difference it makes to your sentence.
Mrs Rathi
8:52
Well done Lauren and Adam - read again and add a full stop and maybe a comma too.
Leon and Max 😜😎
8:52
Also behind the vampire girl is the darkness of the forest and that's when darkness happens ...
Mr. Mitchell
8:53
You could play with that sentence. What about...

The darkness of the forest surrounded Gothrum as the darkness grew.
Mrs Cumming
8:52
Oliver, that's really good. Why do you think she is there?
Mr Brown
8:53
Molly and Sophie, what gives you the impression that she is an angel?
Zak and James
8:53
The deadly looking women stood there with great power.
Mr. Mitchell
8:54
I think the woman could have a deadly name -what name would you give her?
Freya And Charlotte ✨
8:53
Miss Skinner, no, we do not need the comma there.
Mrs Lee
8:53
Oliver, I love how you have written "a delicate figure  in black..."
Bobby 😐👻 Owain
8:54
The woman was there, spreading her wings so she could take off from her dark, gloomy home...
Rosie & Darcy 😍
8:54
Victoria dark soul,looks like she has a dark soul,and she looks like a vampire.
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