JotCast | Year 5 Thursday 2nd April | 4/2/2020

Year 5 Thursday 2nd April

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Jazmin

12:00

As the men sailed blindly, as they had never sailed before, the came across a big pull the warter was getting stronger and stronger. They were headed for a cliff.” This may be last rainbow we ever see my freind,” said the man as they helplessly glided Dow the water fall

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Mr Fairhurst

12:00

I love that you included some speech. Well done.

Sylvie

12:00

AS the water fell down a rambow apered in the distanes.

Lexie

12:00

Oh no , just as they thought things were going well the worry as they are about to go down the waterfalls

Amelia

12:00

Panicking, the explores are about to face a towering water fall and are trying to turn the canoe around. They are losing their hope!

Aiden G

12:00

I was running as fast as my legs would go, until I found a miracle, it was a canoe at the edge of a river. I leaped into it and searched for a paddle.

Alex

12:00

They heard the mighty roar of the colossal waterfall, before they saw it.

Hollie Bond

12:00

As the explorer hopped into the boat he got the heavy orrs and set of. As he turned the corner he saw huge water fall which had a massive drop. He began to shout because he was terrified.

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matthew

12:00

The rainbow could be seen from miles away because it was so beautiful with four different colours brightening up the waterfall. With no confidence the men tried to escape the dangerous fall.

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Mr Fairhurst

12:01

You might want to write a sentence as they go over the waterfall before I put the next picture up.

Josh

12:03

Sorry again sir I accidentally sent those when I wasn't finished because I tried to press x because I made a mistake but the enter button is next to it so it's hard

Mr Fairhurst

12:03

Don't worry Josh, lots of people are doing that.

Grace

12:03

They tumbled down the waterfall with a crash. Luckily there were no rocks at the bottom.

Lexie

12:04

I have been writing everything on a peice of paper

Mr Fairhurst

12:04

That's fine but try to type it in so I can see. Are you struggling to type it in quick enough? Or are you catching enter?

Aoife

12:04

The boat carried them long enough to restore their energy but, oh no, they have spotted a raging water fall up ahead.Could this be the end?

Amelia

12:04

As the the canoe was leaning over the edge of the waterfall the explorers realised they were about to drop. This was horrific!

Alex

12:04

The explorers tried hard to escape from the treacherous waterfall but fell because of the mighty current dragging them back.

louis

12:04

They went flying like birds through the sky hoping to survive until they noticed a parachute thank goodness.

Mr Fairhurst

12:05

It looks like the boat is ruined. Are they stranded?

Shay

12:05

As soon as possible, the terrified canoeists had to decide whether to swim to shore or approach the destructive waterfalls that lay ahead.

joseph

12:05

As they got close to the edge, they realised this was the end. They looked up at the colourful rainbow and closed the eyes .

matthew

12:05

The cascading water pushed them down the falls.

Laila

12:06

Unfortunately these lions didn’t pass by they must of been starving. It’s very unusual for a lion to chase humans but they where after us. We ran for our life’s across the dusty African plains. The sun was rising high now and the heat was unbearable but in the near distance was a lake with a boat. We paddled through the shallows into the boat and Frantically rowed away, leaving the hungry lions on the shore

Mr Fairhurst

12:06

I'm loving the detail in your story Laila.

Luke

12:07

They were petrified. How would they escape? The water was rushing down and so were they. Splash! they had landed and just before the boat sank they jumped out and they survived.

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Mr Fairhurst

12:07

I love how you used a mixture of sentence lengths. Well done!

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Amelia

12:07

BAD NEWS! The canoe was destroyed but the explores managed to swim to the side. How were they going to complete their journey home.

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Alex

12:08

Plunging into the water the boat broke up into sections. The men clung on for dear life to the pieces of the boat.

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Grace

12:08

The boat was damaged, they were sinking. Thankfully there was land up ahead so they swam for the rest of the water journey. The water was freezing it was weird for a hot place to have cold water

Mr Fairhurst

12:08

Good. Remember to use commas to separate clauses.

Jack

12:08

With there boat in ruins the explores started walking .

Mr Fairhurst

12:09

Final picture coming up.

louis

12:09

How do I write this from my last sentence.

Mr Fairhurst

12:09

Don't worry if it doesn't follow on exactly. Maybe that parachute down and see the boat is wrecked at the bottom?

Sylvie

12:09

sudenly,bout claps oh no.

Alex

12:10

The men were petrified, the water felt icy cold on their bodies.

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Jazmin

12:10

as the survivor emerged from the pool of swamp warter he strugled trying to find his best pall but he was nowhere to be seen. “Nooooooo!” He cried, as he pulled him onto land he took him round his shoulders and headed for home.

Aiden G

12:10

I felt so happy as the water started to pull the canoe away from the edge, I wasn't going to be lunch for the lions after all. Suddenly the boat started to rock and pick up speed. As I looked around I could see the most beautiful rainbow, but the rainbow was over the biggest waterfall ever! I was heading straight for it with no paddles, I paddled with my hands but there was no stopping. I had to decide to jump out or stay in the boat.

Lily

12:10

Sadly, the mighty waterfall ruined the small canoe. The poor explorers were stranded at the bottom. " Where are we?" asked the stranded explorer. The poor explorers were stranded at a small dessert island.

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